Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o pronunciation er bhul ache, ar sentence structure o clear na. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, jemon 'Today, the weather is very hot in my area because it is summer. The temperature is around 32 degrees Celsius.'

例: Today, the weather is very hot in my area because it is summer. The temperature is around 32 degrees Celsius.

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu word choice o pronunciation er bhul ache, ar 'rible' shobdo ta bujhte parchi na. Apni chesta korun clear ar correct word use korte, jemon 'I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing.'

例: I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable and refreshing.

提案: Apnar uttor khub short ar simple. Apni chesta korun kichu supporting details add korte, jemon karon bole, 'I prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside and do activities without worrying about rain.'

例: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to go outside and do activities without worrying about rain.

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o word choice er bhul ache, ar kichu sentence incomplete. Apni chesta korun clear ar complete sentence use korte, jemon 'I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house. It helps me plan my day, like deciding what to wear or whether to take an umbrella.'

例: I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house. It helps me plan my day, like deciding what to wear or whether to take an umbrella.

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu spelling o grammar er bhul ache, ar kichu word bujhte kothin. Apni chesta korun clear ar correct word use korte, jemon 'In recent years, climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and human life. We have seen more frequent and severe weather events like hurricanes, floods, and storms that cause significant damage.'

例: In recent years, climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and human life. We have seen more frequent and severe weather events like hurricanes, floods, and storms that cause significant damage.

提案: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar o word choice er bhul ache, ar kichu sentence incomplete. Apni chesta korun clear ar complete sentence use korte, jemon 'Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from mine. Experiencing a colder or more tropical climate can be refreshing and exciting. For example, visiting a snowy city would allow me to try winter activities like skiing.'

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from mine. Experiencing a colder or more tropical climate can be refreshing and exciting. For example, visiting a snowy city would allow me to try winter activities like skiing.

× 2 day is very hot weather in our area and that's.

✓ Today the weather is very hot in our area.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing articles. '2 day' should be 'Today', and 'very hot weather' should be rephrased as 'the weather is very hot'. This correction follows proper present tense usage and sentence structure.

× Summer Ding and here here's the 32°C.

✓ It is summer and the temperature is 32°C here.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Summer Ding' is incorrect and should be 'It is summer'. 'here here's the 32°C' is awkward; it should be 'the temperature is 32°C here'. This correction improves clarity and sentence structure.

× I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfort, rible and refreshing.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I find it more comfortable, pleasant, and refreshing.

The word 'comfort' is a noun but should be the adjective 'comfortable'. 'rible' seems to be a misspelling of 'terrible' but contextually 'pleasant' fits better. Correct adjectives improve sentence meaning and grammar.

× Is I actually take the weather forecast every morning before leaving a cows, I find it helpful to plan my day, especially to decide what to hire or whether to carry an umbrella.

✓ I actually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house. I find it helpful to plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'Is I' should be 'I', 'take the weather forecast' is incorrect; 'check the weather forecast' is correct. 'leaving a cows' is incorrect; it should be 'leaving the house'. 'what to hire' should be 'what to wear'. Splitting into two sentences improves clarity.

× If rain is expected, I make sure to take appropriate. Raise the ocean.

✓ If rain is expected, I make sure to take appropriate measures.

The phrase 'take appropriate. Raise the ocean.' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'take appropriate measures' to convey the intended meaning. The original contains unrelated words and punctuation errors.

× In recent year, climate change has had profound affect on the environment and human life.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had a profound effect on the environment and human life.

'year' should be plural 'years' to indicate a period. 'affect' is a verb; the noun 'effect' is correct here. Adding 'a' before 'profound effect' is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent and sever weather events such as hurricanes, flowed and terms and routes which have caused significant damage to communities worldwide.

✓ Firstly, we have witnessed more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and storms and droughts which have caused significant damage to communities worldwide.

'sever' should be 'severe'. 'flowed' is incorrect; it should be 'floods'. 'terms and routes' seems to be a mishearing or typo; likely intended 'storms and droughts'. Correct adjectives and nouns improve clarity and accuracy.

× Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities and different climate from my own.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my own.

'climate' should be plural 'climates' to match 'cities'. Also, 'and' should be 'with' to correctly link 'cities' and 'different climates'.

× Experiencing and new climate such as colder and more topical environment can be refreshing and exciting.

✓ Experiencing a new climate, such as a colder and more tropical environment, can be refreshing and exciting.

'and' should be 'a'. 'topical' is incorrect; the correct word is 'tropical'. Articles 'a' are needed before 'new climate' and 'colder and more tropical environment' for grammatical correctness.

× For example, visiting is noise city would allow me to try winter activities that posse.

✓ For example, visiting a snowy city would allow me to try winter activities that I possess.

'is noise city' is incorrect; it should be 'a snowy city'. 'that posse' is unclear; possibly 'that I enjoy' or 'that I can do'. Assuming 'possess' is intended, but better phrasing would be 'that I enjoy'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.