Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有很多发音和用词错误，导致表达不清晰。建议你使用简单且准确的词汇描述天气，比如使用'cloudy', 'rainy', 'gloomy'等词汇，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

例: I live in Chengdu, and the weather here is often rainy and gloomy, especially in winter. It usually clears up after rain, but the sky remains cloudy.

提案: 回答时要注意句子逻辑和语法，避免无关内容。建议直接表达喜好，并给出具体原因，比如冷天气让你感到不舒服。

例: I prefer hot weather because cold weather makes me feel tired and I often catch a cold.

提案: 回答中有很多发音和词汇错误，建议使用简单准确的词汇表达，比如'dry weather is comfortable because wet weather makes me feel sticky and everything gets wet.'

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel sticky and uncomfortable. Also, my clothes often get wet when it rains.

提案: 回答中有很多发音和词汇错误，建议使用简单句子表达习惯，比如'I check the weather forecast every morning to avoid getting wet or wearing wrong clothes.'

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast almost every morning because I don't want to get caught in the rain without an umbrella.

提案: 回答时要注意发音和词汇准确性，建议使用清晰的句子表达观点，比如'Summers are getting hotter, storms are more frequent, and glaciers are melting.'

例: I think climate change has caused summers to become hotter, increased the number of storms, and glaciers are melting faster.

提案: 回答中有些词汇和句子不完整，建议使用完整句子表达愿望，并具体说明想去的地方和活动。

例: Yes, I would love to visit a snowy city, maybe abroad, to try snowboarding and build a snowman like in the movies.

× Wow I live in Chengdu and honestly the weather here is kind mood Moody Kingdom Moody.

✓ Wow I live in Chengdu and honestly the weather here is kind of moody.

The phrase 'kind mood Moody Kingdom Moody' is incorrect and confusing. The correct phrase is 'kind of moody' to describe the weather's variability or changeableness. 'Kind of' is an adverbial phrase modifying 'moody'. The original sentence misuses adjectives and includes nonsensical words.

× I mean this guy is always greedy and it only gas clean after ring.

✓ I mean this sky is always grey and it only gets clear after rain.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'guy' should be 'sky', 'greedy' should be 'grey', 'gas' should be 'gets', 'clean' should be 'clear', and 'ring' should be 'rain'. Also, 'after rain' is the correct prepositional phrase. The sentence misuses words and prepositions, leading to confusion.

× I mean specially in the winter it can feel a bit gloomy.

✓ I mean especially in the winter it can feel a bit gloomy.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially' to indicate emphasis. 'Especially' is an adverb used to single out something as more significant.

× I am definitely more of the hot weather person.

✓ I am definitely more of a hot weather person.

The phrase 'more of the hot weather person' incorrectly uses the definite article 'the'. It should be 'a hot weather person' to indicate one among many types of people. This is an article usage issue related to pronouns and determiners.

× I mean when is Friday?

✓ I mean when it's Friday,

The original sentence 'when is Friday?' is a question, but here it is used as a subordinate clause. The correct form is 'when it's Friday' to indicate a time condition. This is a sentence structure error.

× Cold weather can cuase my web you know.

✓ Cold weather can cause my web you know.

The word 'cuase' is a misspelling of 'cause'. Also, 'my web' is unclear; possibly 'my web' is a mishearing or typo. Assuming 'my web' is incorrect, it might be 'my health' or 'my well-being'. However, since only grammar mistakes in the list are to be corrected, only spelling is corrected here.

× Oh, dry weather of course. Of course I can't deal with the sticky a sweetie feeling when it helmet.

✓ Oh, dry weather of course. Of course I can't deal with the sticky, sweaty feeling when it’s humid.

The phrase 'sticky a sweetie feeling' is incorrect; it should be 'sticky, sweaty feeling'. Also, 'helmet' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'humid'. The adjectives 'sticky' and 'sweaty' describe the feeling caused by humidity.

× Also in rainy weather everything get method and I always forget my ember.

✓ Also in rainy weather everything gets wet and I always forget my umbrella.

The verb 'get' should be 'gets' to agree with the singular subject 'everything'. 'Method' is incorrect and should be 'wet'. 'Ember' is a misspelling of 'umbrella'. This correction addresses subject-verb agreement and plural/singular issues.

× Yeah, I chocolate pretty often, like almost every morning.

✓ Yeah, I check the weather pretty often, like almost every morning.

'Chocolate' is a mishearing or typo for 'check the weather'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but since it affects sentence meaning, it is corrected here.

× I mean, I don't want to get caught in the ring wearing or wrong shoes or something, and I don't wanna forget my umbrella and be sucked.

✓ I mean, I don't want to get caught in the rain wearing the wrong shoes or something, and I don't wanna forget my umbrella and get soaked.

'Ring' should be 'rain', 'or wrong shoes' should be 'the wrong shoes', and 'be sucked' should be 'get soaked'. These are vocabulary and verb form errors affecting clarity.

× Well, I sang the weather is gonna be crazy lately.

✓ Well, I think the weather has been crazy lately.

'Sang' is incorrect; the intended verb is likely 'think'. Also, 'gonna be' is informal and incorrect for recent past events; 'has been' is appropriate for recent ongoing situations. This corrects tense and verb choice.

× Like summaries are getting way hotter and we've had more storms than before.

✓ Like summers are getting way hotter and we've had more storms than before.

'Summaries' is a mishearing of 'summers'. Correcting the noun to fit the context.

× And also read online side galley queries are melting.

✓ And also I read online that glaciers are melting.

The original sentence is garbled: 'read online side galley queries' is incorrect. The intended meaning is 'I read online that glaciers are melting.' This corrects verb usage and sentence structure.

× Oh totally, I'd love to visit somewhere with snow. Like harvesting or maybe even somewhere abroad I it.

✓ Oh totally, I'd love to visit somewhere with snow. Like Harbin or maybe even somewhere abroad.

'Harvesting' is likely a mishearing of 'Harbin', a city known for snow. 'I it' is incorrect and removed. This corrects pronoun misuse and clarifies meaning.

× Be cold to try some snowboarding or just to build a snowman like in the movies.

✓ It would be cool to try some snowboarding or just to build a snowman like in the movies.

'Be cold' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'It would be cool' to express desire or opinion. This corrects verb usage and sentence structure.