Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm cũng như ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

例: I live in a tropical climate where the weather is generally warm and stable. It is not too hot or too cold. In summer, temperatures are high, while in winter, it can get quite cool. I really enjoy this kind of weather.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc xây dựng câu hoàn chỉnh, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết ý tưởng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer cold weather because I can wear warm clothes that keep my body comfortable. However, when the weather is hot, I feel uncomfortable and prefer to stay indoors.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm phong phú nội dung.

例: From my point of view, I prefer dry weather because I can go outside and do outdoor activities like swimming or flying kites. However, when the weather is wet, I usually stay at home because it is difficult to go out.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Hãy luyện tập sử dụng các cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác và thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before I go out. This helps me choose suitable clothes and plan my activities according to the weather conditions.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt hiệu quả hơn.

例: I think climate change has greatly affected the weather in recent years. Global warming causes extreme weather conditions, which can lead to diseases affecting both people and animals.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, if I have the chance, I would like to visit cities with different climates from where I live. I want to experience new weather conditions and enjoy different kinds of activities.

× Ann is Heather stability.

✓ And it is weather stability.

The original sentence uses 'Heather' instead of 'weather' and 'Ann' instead of 'and'. Also, 'stability' is a noun, so 'weather stability' is correct. The sentence needed correction for word choice and clarity.

× Annina summer high heart Anindo winter it's quite cold an I love this kind of weather.

✓ And in summer, it's hot, and in winter, it's quite cold, and I love this kind of weather.

The original sentence has many misspellings and lacks proper conjunctions. Correcting spelling and adding conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× My favorite weather is cold. Because when is cold, I can wear. Call to make sure my body will warm, but when the weather hot I hide it. I don't.

✓ My favorite weather is cold because when it is cold, I can wear clothes to make sure my body stays warm, but when the weather is hot, I don't.

The original sentences are fragmented and have missing subjects and verbs. Combining sentences and adding missing words improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Well, from my point of Bill, I love dry weather because when I write I can go out to do some outdoor activities like go to the swimming pool or fly to chi but when when we have wet weather, I can go out.

✓ Well, from my point of view, I love dry weather because when I write, I can go out to do some outdoor activities like going to the swimming pool or flying to the city, but when we have wet weather, I cannot go out.

The phrase 'point of Bill' is incorrect; it should be 'point of view'. Also, 'fly to chi' is unclear and likely meant 'fly to the city'. The sentence also had contradictory statements about going out in wet weather, corrected for clarity.

× I always do stay at home and do.

✓ I always stay at home and rest.

The phrase 'do stay' is awkward and incomplete. 'Stay at home and rest' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression.

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast when I go out to make sure that I can wear suitable closes for that day or. I can see the comfort, suitable weather too, that I can go out.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast when I go out to make sure that I can wear suitable clothes for that day or to see if the weather is comfortable and suitable for going out.

The original sentence has pronoun and word choice errors ('closes' instead of 'clothes') and incomplete sentences. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× I thing in red. In recent years, climate change affect in Python a weather too much when we have global warming or.

✓ I think in recent years, climate change has affected the weather a lot when we have global warming.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb forms ('thing' instead of 'think', 'affect' instead of 'has affected') and unclear words ('in Python a weather'). Correcting verb tense and word choice is necessary.

× Disease from bad weather in impact on people whether an animal.

✓ Diseases from bad weather impact people and animals.

The original sentence misuses 'whether' instead of 'weather' and has awkward phrasing. Correcting pronouns and word choice improves meaning.

× Yes, if I have a chain I won, I would like to visit other cities that have different Jamie from my. From basic where I live and I want to try and some other kind of climbing as other kind of weather Ann I will lie in two Oh.

✓ Yes, if I have a chance, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live, and I want to try some other kinds of climbing and experience other kinds of weather, and I will live there too.

The original sentence has many errors including 'chain I won' instead of 'chance', 'Jamie' instead of 'climate', and unclear phrases. Correcting pronouns, word choice, and sentence structure is necessary for clarity.