Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，注意时态和冠词的使用，同时避免冗余，简洁表达天气状况。

例: It's sunny and hot today. The highest temperature is around 30 degrees Celsius. When I go outside, I usually take an umbrella and apply sunscreen to protect myself from the sun.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不准确，语法错误较多，建议多练习表达喜好时的句型，注意单词拼写和句子连贯性。

例: I prefer hot weather because in summer I can eat watermelon and many kinds of fruits. I also enjoy eating ice cream and going swimming. However, in winter, I have to wear thick jackets, which is uncomfortable and inconvenient.

提案: 回答内容不完整且有拼写错误，建议学习正确词汇（dry, skin）和完整表达观点，避免断句不连贯。

例: I prefer dry weather because I feel more energetic when it's dry. Also, my skin doesn't feel sticky or uncomfortable in dry weather.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法和词汇错误较多，建议练习完整句子表达习惯和频率，注意句子结构和词汇准确性。

例: Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather forecast every night. I check the forecast for the next day to decide whether I need to bring an umbrella.

提案: 回答内容不连贯且词汇错误严重，建议加强对气候变化相关词汇和句型的学习，练习表达因果关系和具体例子。

例: I think climate change has caused many extreme weather events in recent years. For example, there have been more heat waves, droughts, and stronger typhoons and hurricanes.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议练习表达个人偏好和原因，注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

例: No, I wouldn't like to visit cities with very different climates from mine. I think extreme cold or hot weather could make me feel uncomfortable or even get sick.

× It's a sunny today it were hot.

✓ It's a sunny day today and it is hot.

这里'sunny'是形容词，后面应该接名词'day'，而且'today'前面需要加上'day'来表示具体的时间。'it were hot'中'were'是复数形式，主语是单数，应该用'is'。

× The highest temperature is certified degree.

✓ The highest temperature is a certain degree.

'certified degree'用词不当，应该用'a certain degree'表示某个具体的温度。

× You for I need to go outside.

✓ So I need to go outside.

句子结构混乱，'You for'无意义，应该用' so '连接前后句子。

× I need take.

✓ I need to take.

动词'need'后面接动词时，应该用不定式'to take'。

× An umbrella.

✓ An umbrella.

单独的短语不完整，应该和前句连成完整句子，如'I need to take an umbrella.'。

× And make.

✓ And put on sun cream.

'make'用法不当，应该用'put on sun cream'表示涂抹防晒霜。

× I prefer hot wise becauses in summer.

✓ I prefer hot weather because in summer,

'hot wise'错误，应该用'hot weather'；'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'。

× I can't eat wet watermelon and many kinds of fruits.

✓ I can eat watermelon and many kinds of fruits.

句意应为夏天可以吃西瓜和水果，'can't'用错，应该是'can'。

× But in winter, I have to put on think jackets.

✓ But in winter, I have to put on thick jackets.

'think'拼写错误，应为'thick'。

× It's worry.

✓ It's worrying.

'worry'是动词，形容词形式应为'worrying'，表示令人担忧的。

× I prefer driveways.

✓ I prefer dry weather.

'driveways'是车道，错误使用，应为'dry weather'表示干燥的天气。

× There's no SDK failing on my skin.

✓ There's no skin falling on my skin.

'SDK failing'无意义，可能想表达'没有皮肤脱落'，应为'skin falling'。

× Yes, I have this habit before by the time every night.

✓ Yes, I have this habit of checking the weather every night before bedtime.

句子结构混乱，'before by the time'重复且不通顺，应改为'before bedtime'。

× I check the next. Forecast.

✓ I check the next day's forecast.

'next forecast'不完整，应为'next day's forecast'表示第二天的天气预报。

× And decide. Whether through the ITK tomorrow?

✓ And decide whether to go out tomorrow based on the forecast.

句子不完整且含糊，'through the ITK'无意义，应改为'go out'。

× I think a climate to change in recent years.

✓ I think climate change has occurred in recent years.

句子结构错误，'a climate to change'不正确，应为'climate change has occurred'。

× Has them. 'Cause them many extreme weather.

✓ It has caused many extreme weather events.

'them'用错，应该用'it'指代气候变化，'cause'应为'caused'。

× For example. Say more. Heat waves drived under heaven greens at the typhoon hurricane.

✓ For example, more heat waves, droughts, and hurricanes have occurred.

句子断裂且用词错误，'drived'应为'driven'或'caused'，'under heaven greens'无意义，应改为'droughts'。

× No I wouldn't. I used to. My local climate with it in places with very different climates could cause discomfort.

✓ No, I wouldn't. I am used to my local climate, and being in places with very different climates could cause discomfort.

'used to'用法错误，应为'am used to'表示习惯，句子结构需调整。

× Like getting sick in extremely cold or hot ways.

✓ Like getting sick in extremely cold or hot weather.

'ways'用错，应为'weather'表示天气。