Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте лишних слов и неуместных выражений. Начинайте с прямого ответа на вопрос, затем добавьте конкретные детали о погоде в вашем регионе.

例: I live in Kazakhstan, where people generally enjoy sunny weather. I personally prefer days without clouds because they feel bright and cheerful.

提案: Старайтесь говорить более связно и избегать пауз и повторов. Начинайте с чёткого утверждения, затем объясните причину своего выбора с помощью связующих слов.

例: I prefer cold weather because I find hot weather more uncomfortable. For example, it's easier to dress warmly than to cool down in the heat.

提案: Ответ должен быть более ясным и логичным. Используйте связующие слова для объяснения своего мнения и приводите конкретные примеры, чтобы сделать ответ более содержательным.

例: It depends on the country, but I prefer wet weather because in many Asian countries, rain supports agriculture and keeps the environment fresh.

提案: Старайтесь говорить более чётко и грамотно. Начинайте с прямого ответа, затем добавьте детали о том, когда и почему вы проверяете прогноз погоды, используя связующие слова.

例: I always check the weather forecast before going out, especially when I go to school. This helps me decide what clothes to wear.

提案: Избегайте нецензурной лексики и говорите более связно. Начинайте с общего утверждения, затем приведите конкретные примеры или последствия изменения климата.

例: Nowadays, we can see that the climate is changing, with temperatures becoming hotter. This leads to problems like droughts and extreme weather events.

提案: Говорите более уверенно и грамотно. Начинайте с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину с помощью связующих слов и приведите конкретные детали.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it would be interesting to see how people adapt their lifestyles to the weather. It would be a very educational experience.

× I live in the Kazakhstan and the peoples in there really like sunny weather.

✓ I live in Kazakhstan and the people there really like sunny weather.

The definite article 'the' is not used before country names like 'Kazakhstan'. Also, 'peoples' is incorrect here; the correct plural form is 'people'.

× And meet you.

✓ Nice to meet you.

The phrase 'And meet you' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct expression is 'Nice to meet you' to greet someone politely.

× I like weather with no clouds.

✓ I like weather with no clouds.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

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✓ [Unintelligible or inappropriate content removed]

The sentence contains unintelligible or inappropriate content and cannot be corrected.

× I I'm not really sure but. I'd say called 'cause.

✓ I'm not really sure, but I'd say cold because.

The word 'called' is incorrect; it should be 'cold' to describe temperature. Also, 'I'd say' is a contraction of 'I would say' and is correct here.

× Uh, when it hot, like I think it's worse than cold weather, so.

✓ Uh, when it's hot, I think it's worse than cold weather, so.

The verb 'is' is missing in 'when it hot'; it should be 'when it's hot'.

× Better, it will be cold.

✓ It's better if it is cold.

The sentence structure is awkward; using 'It's better if it is cold' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× It depends with the country where.

✓ It depends on the country where.

The correct preposition after 'depends' is 'on', not 'with'.

× This weather is.

✓ This is the weather.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward; rephrasing to 'This is the weather' makes it clearer.

× Uhm, but let's say a wet because like in the Asian countries in there.

✓ Uhm, but let's say wet because, like in the Asian countries there.

The article 'a' before 'wet' is incorrect because 'wet' is an adjective, not a noun. Also, 'in there' is redundant; 'there' suffices.

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✓ [Unintelligible content removed]

The sentence is unintelligible and lacks a verb; cannot correct.

× I'm always checking weather forecasts before I'm going somewhere.

✓ I always check weather forecasts before I go somewhere.

Using the simple present tense 'I always check' is more appropriate for habitual actions than the present continuous 'I'm always checking'.

× I'm go out somewhere.

✓ I go out somewhere.

The auxiliary verb 'am' is missing in 'I'm go out'; it should be 'I go out' or 'I'm going out' depending on context.

× Uh, for example, where I'm going to school and checking weather forecasts and I see what I can suitable Wilkin.

✓ For example, when I'm going to school, I check the weather forecast to see what is suitable to wear.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; restructuring improves clarity and grammar.

× How we can see nowadays climats really change it in recent years the weather it becames hotter and hotter and.

✓ As we can see nowadays, the climate has really changed in recent years; the weather has become hotter and hotter.

Incorrect word order and pronoun use; 'climats' should be 'climate', and 'becames' should be 'has become'. Also, 'it' is unnecessary.

× I think it will be. It will. **** you ***** hole.

✓ I think it will be... [Unintelligible content removed]

The sentence is incomplete and contains unintelligible content; cannot fully correct.

× Yes, I want. Uhm, I, I think it's will be very interesting experience to see how other people lives depends with their weather in their country.

✓ Yes, I want to. Uhm, I think it will be a very interesting experience to see how other people live depending on the weather in their country.

Incorrect use of 'it's will be' should be 'it will be'. 'Lives' should be 'live' to agree with plural 'people'. 'Depends with' should be 'depending on'.

× And it's a really, really teach full.

✓ And it's really, really thoughtful.

The word 'teach full' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'thoughtful'.