Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇错误较多，建议加强句子结构的练习，避免重复和语义不清。可以尝试用简单句表达天气特点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I live in Shenzhen, where the weather is often rainy because the city is near the sea. However, there are also many sunny days throughout the year.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议学习如何用简单句表达喜好和原因，避免词汇拼写错误，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer cold weather because when it is hot, I feel uncomfortable and cannot concentrate. Cold weather helps me feel calm and relaxed.

提案: 回答中有大量拼写和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议练习正确拼写和句子结构，明确表达自己的喜好并给出具体理由。

例: I prefer dry weather because I live in Xinjiang, where the weather is usually dry. I think I would feel more comfortable in a dry climate.

提案: 回答较简单且不完整，语法和词汇错误较多。建议练习完整句子表达习惯和原因，使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast before going outside. It helps me decide whether to bring an umbrella or wear suitable clothes.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法和词汇错误较多，建议学习如何用简单句表达观点和举例，避免词汇错误，增强表达的逻辑性。

例: I think the temperature has increased in recent years due to climate change. This makes people feel uncomfortable, and some plants and animals may not survive in the hotter climate.

提案: 回答中有大量拼写和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议练习正确拼写和句子结构，明确表达愿望并给出具体原因。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as colder places. I want to experience different weather and learn how people live there.

× I live in Shenzhen and the weather here is usually raining or when the becaused Shenzhen is close to see so it is a most have raining or Wendy but it is a lot of time to signing day.

✓ I live in Shenzhen and the weather here is usually rainy because Shenzhen is close to the sea, so it mostly has rain or wind, but there are also many sunny days.

动词形式错误，'raining' 应该用形容词 'rainy' 来描述天气。'becaused' 是错误的过去式，应为 'because'。'see' 应为 'sea'。句子结构混乱，需调整顺序和用词。

× I preferred cold whiter because while I was in hot water I will feel very and I attended an I will feel don't thinking in the hot water.

✓ I prefer cold weather because when I am in hot weather, I feel very uncomfortable and distracted.

时态错误，'preferred' 应用一般现在时 'prefer' 来表达习惯。'whiter' 拼写错误，应为 'weather'。'hot water' 应为 'hot weather'。句子结构不完整，需调整。

× I usually want to go to the. Cold weather and stay in there because I think code writer can let me claim.

✓ I usually want to go to cold weather and stay there because I think cold weather can help me calm down.

时态和拼写错误，'code writer' 应为 'cold weather'，'claim' 应为 'calm'。句子结构需调整。

× I prefer white white her because I live in Xinjiang which white white are usually so I think if I get all dry white her city I will count.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I live in Xinjiang where the weather is usually dry, so I think if I go to a city with dry weather, I will feel comfortable.

形容词使用错误，'white white her' 应为 'weather'。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Yes, I have the habit of checking the whiter be 'cause I think if I want to. Play outside, I would like to check the weather is sunny or raining.

✓ Yes, I have the habit of checking the weather because I think if I want to play outside, I would like to check whether the weather is sunny or rainy.

介词使用错误，'be' 多余。'raining' 应用形容词 'rainy'。句子结构需调整。

× I think in recent year the temperature is higher and I think this change can make me people in orders crutch arm.

✓ I think in recent years the temperature has been higher and I think this change can make people feel uncomfortable.

时态错误，'recent year' 应为复数 'recent years'。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Uncomfortable, for example, like some plants or animals, they will feel hot and can't believe, can't leave.

✓ For example, some plants or animals will feel hot and cannot survive or leave.

代词使用错误，'can't believe' 应为 'cannot survive'。句子结构需调整。

× Yes, I really want to try bold in different countries like Sind young or others different waiter because actually elevation join it is a white sweater.

✓ Yes, I really want to travel to different countries like Sydney or others with different weather because actually elevation affects the weather.

介词和拼写错误，'bold' 应为 'travel'，'Sind young' 应为 'Sydney'，'waiter' 应为 'weather'，'join it is a white sweater' 句子不通，需调整。

× I will prefer to try drive writer and leave there to experience the letter.

✓ I would prefer to try dry weather and live there to experience the climate.

形容词拼写错误，'drive writer' 应为 'dry weather'，'leave' 应为 'live'，'letter' 应为 'climate'。