Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문법 오류를 수정하고, 더 자연스럽고 구체적인 답변을 위해 문장을 다듬으세요. 예를 들어, 'I live in South Korea, which has four distinct seasons.'처럼 표현할 수 있습니다.

例: I live in South Korea, which has four distinct seasons: spring, summer, autumn, and winter.

提案: 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하고, 중복된 표현을 줄이며, 명확한 이유를 제시하세요. 예를 들어, 'I prefer cold weather because I dislike sweating in the summer, and I enjoy cooler temperatures.'

例: I prefer cold weather because I dislike sweating in the summer, and I enjoy cooler temperatures.

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로도 틀렸습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 이유를 덧붙여 구체적으로 설명하세요. 예를 들어, 'I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for outdoor activities.'

例: I prefer dry weather because it is more comfortable and convenient for outdoor activities.

提案: 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하고, 질문에 직접 답하며, 구체적인 습관을 설명하세요. 예를 들어, 'I usually check the weather forecast on my phone before I go out so that I can bring an umbrella if it's going to rain.'

例: I usually check the weather forecast on my phone before I go out so that I can bring an umbrella if it's going to rain.

提案: 문법과 단어 선택을 개선하고, 구체적인 예시를 명확하게 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts, leading to significant damage.'

例: In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts, leading to significant damage.

提案: 발음과 문법 오류를 수정하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates. Experiencing a colder or more tropical environment can be refreshing and exciting.'

例: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates. Experiencing a colder or more tropical environment can be refreshing and exciting.

× I'm living in South Korea, which have Four Seasons.

✓ I'm living in South Korea, which has four seasons.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'South Korea', a singular noun, so the verb should be 'has' (third person singular) instead of 'have'. Also, 'Four Seasons' should not be capitalized unless referring to a proper noun; here it refers to the general concept of four seasons, so lowercase is appropriate.

× I prefer cold weather because I don't like to get sweaty on summer.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I don't like to get sweaty in summer.

The correct preposition to use with seasons is 'in', not 'on'. We say 'in summer', 'in winter', etc.

× And I like more. Cool. Weather.

✓ And I like cooler weather more.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly ordered. 'Cooler weather' is the correct comparative adjective form, and 'more' should come after the object to indicate preference.

× I preferred drive with third.

✓ I prefer dry weather.

The sentence is unclear and contains errors. The question was about preferring dry or wet weather. The correct response is 'I prefer dry weather.' 'Preferred' is past tense, but the question is general preference, so present tense 'prefer' is appropriate. 'Drive with third' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo.

× I usually check my phone too. Checking the weather forecast. Whether I go out at home? Because I can bring. Umbrella when it's raining.

✓ I usually check my phone to see the weather forecast before I go out. That way, I can bring an umbrella when it's raining.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. 'Checking the weather forecast' is a fragment; it should be connected to the main sentence. 'Whether I go out at home?' is incorrect; it should be 'before I go out'. 'Because I can bring. Umbrella' is fragmented; it should be combined into a complete sentence.

× Firstly, we have when there's more frequent and serve weather events such as hurricanes, flows and routes which have caused significant damage.

✓ Firstly, we have more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, floods, and droughts which have caused significant damage.

'When' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Serve' should be 'severe'. 'Flows and routes' are incorrect words; the intended words are 'floods and droughts'. These corrections improve clarity and accuracy.

× Yes, I oat definitely like to visit the cities with different climates from my own.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my own.

'Oat' is a typo and should be 'would'. 'The cities' is changed to 'cities' because the sentence refers to cities in general, not specific ones. This correction makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.