Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda konumunuzu belirtirken daha açık ve anlaşılır ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, hava durumunu net ve doğal bir şekilde açıklamalısınız. Cümle yapılarınızı basit ve doğru tutarak, anlamı netleştirin.

例: I live in the northern part of Turkey, where the weather is usually cold in winter and mild in summer.

提案: Cevabınızda neden sıcak havayı tercih ettiğinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade edin. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi tamamlayarak ve gereksiz tekrarları önleyerek daha doğal bir anlatım sağlayın.

例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy spending time at the beach during summer and eating fresh fruits.

提案: Cümlelerinizi tam ve akıcı kurmaya özen gösterin. Neden yağmurlu havayı sevdiğinizi açıkça belirtin ve doğaya olan etkisini mantıklı bir şekilde açıklayın.

例: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy walking in the rain, and I believe rain is important for nature and our future.

提案: Cevabınızı daha net ve düzenli yapmalısınız. Hava durumunu ne zaman ve nasıl kontrol ettiğinizi açıkça belirtin ve cümlelerinizi tamamlayın.

例: I don't check the weather forecast regularly, but sometimes I look at it before appointments to decide what clothes to wear.

提案: Bu konuda görüşünüzü daha net ve tutarlı ifade edin. Cümlelerinizi tamamlayarak ve konuyla ilgili spesifik detaylar vererek daha etkili bir cevap oluşturun.

例: I believe climate change affects different parts of our country in various ways, such as causing extreme weather events.

提案: Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve doğru kurmalısınız. Farklı iklimlere sahip şehirleri ziyaret etmek istemenizin nedenlerini net ve mantıklı şekilde açıklayın.

例: I would like to visit cities with different climates because it offers a new perspective and helps me relax by experiencing various weather conditions.

× In Turkey. I live in both cases. Located in north of North End is not east, West, north and West of the Turkey and our weather is so.

✓ I live in Turkey. It is located in the north of the country, not in the east or west. Our weather is like this.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure, making it difficult to understand. Combining the fragments into complete sentences improves clarity and coherence.

× I prefer hot weather becauses as I love son.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I love the sun.

The phrase 'becauses as' is incorrect. The correct conjunction is 'because' to express reason.

× I usually spend my time in the sea and beach at during the summertime and I love summer foolish fruits and also I love very.

✓ I usually spend my time at the sea and beach during the summertime. I also love summer fruits very much.

The prepositions 'in the sea and beach at during' are incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'at the sea and beach during'. Also, 'foolish fruits' is likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'summer fruits'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I prefer wet weather. Be 'cause I love walking in the. Rain raining skates better for our Mother Nature. And more there is more is crucial for our future.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I love walking in the rain. Rain is better for our Mother Nature, and it is crucial for our future.

The phrase 'Be 'cause' should be 'because'. 'Rain raining skates' is incorrect; corrected to 'rain'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually no, but sometimes I want to learn whether for my appointments I wear a cloth according to weather. An IVR. Gloss for the cold headers or something.

✓ Actually, no, but sometimes I want to check the weather for my appointments so I can wear clothes accordingly, like a jacket or gloves for the cold weather.

The sentence has pronoun and vocabulary errors. 'Whether' should be 'weather'. 'An IVR. Gloss' is likely 'a jacket, gloves'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Climate change is. I don't believe actually climate change is. Depending on the. Location of our. Country.

✓ Climate change depends on the location of our country. Actually, I don't believe in climate change.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining and restructuring them improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Is I like to visiting other studies exploring new countries.

✓ I like visiting other cities and exploring new countries.

The phrase 'Is I like to visiting' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I like visiting'. Also, 'studies' should be 'cities'.

× It is used as a different type of perspective and also experiencing different weathers.

✓ It gives a different perspective and also allows experiencing different weathers.

The pronoun 'It is used as' is awkward here. Rephrased to 'It gives' for clarity and correctness.

× Halves are haps. Us more relaxing and.

✓ It helps us relax more.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewritten to a clear and grammatically correct sentence.