Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“freeze”应为“freezing”，并且可以更自然地表达天气特点。建议使用更准确的形容词和完整句子。

例: I live in a city in northeast China. Summers are usually sunny and mild, while winters are extremely cold and often freezing.

提案: 回答不够清晰，存在语法和表达错误，如“fear A tag”不明白。建议简洁明了地表达喜好，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I prefer hot weather because I don't like feeling cold. Cold weather makes me uncomfortable and hard to concentrate, so I usually travel south during winter.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确时态，避免重复，并举具体例子说明原因。

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable. For example, staying in rainy weather for a long time can affect my mood.

提案: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子，建议更自然地表达习惯，并说明具体时间和频率。

例: Yes, I have been checking the weather forecast daily since I got my first smartphone about eight years ago. It helps me decide what to wear each day.

提案: 回答中有重复和拼写错误，且例子不明确。建议使用准确词汇，举具体且正确的例子说明气候变化的影响。

例: Climate change has caused severe effects recently, such as more frequent floods, droughts, and extreme weather events.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议简洁表达愿望，并说明原因，使用连贯的句子。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because traveling helps me experience diverse cultures and lifestyles.

× In recent years, climate change change had a big effects on the environment and society.

✓ In recent years, climate change had a big effect on the environment and society.

“effects”是复数形式，但前面用的是单数“a”，应改为单数“effect”。“effect”表示影响，单数形式更符合句意。

× In recent years, climate change change had a big effects on the environment and society.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had a big effect on the environment and society.

“In recent years”表示最近一段时间，应该用现在完成时“has had”表示从过去持续到现在的影响，而不是简单过去时“had”。

× but the weather in winter is very cold and freeze.

✓ but the weather in winter is very cold and freezing.

“freeze”是动词原形，句中需要形容词形式来描述天气，应使用现在分词“freezing”作为形容词。

× Between the two I would go for how the weather because I'm the kind of person that is very scared of cold weather and the cold weather allows me to fear A tag and can't focus.

✓ Between the two, I would go for hot weather because I'm the kind of person who is very scared of cold weather and cold weather makes me feel afraid and unable to focus.

“how the weather”用法错误，应为“hot weather”。“that”指人时应用“who”。“allows me to fear A tag”表达不清，应改为“makes me feel afraid”。“can't focus”前缺主语，应补充。

× Between the two, I would go for dry weather because I'm the kind of person who didn't doesn't like wet weather and bad weather will make me feel uncomfortable for example if I stay you know right weather for long term.

✓ Between the two, I would go for dry weather because I'm the kind of person who doesn't like wet weather and bad weather makes me feel uncomfortable, for example, if I stay in wet weather for a long time.

“didn't doesn't”重复，应用“doesn't”。“you know right weather”表达错误，应为“wet weather”。“for long term”应为“for a long time”。

× if I stay you know right weather for long term.

✓ if I stay in wet weather for a long time.

动词“stay”后应接介词“in”表示处于某种环境中。

× So it becomes more convenient to check weather forecast and I tried to check it every day to choose what I should.

✓ So it becomes more convenient to check the weather forecast and I try to check it every day to decide what I should wear.

“tried”时态不对，应为现在时“try”。“choose what I should”表达不完整，应补充“wear”。

× For example, we can see more and more additions such eyes, flaws, dry droids.

✓ For example, we can see more and more additions such as floods, droughts, and dry periods.

“additions”用词错误，应为“additions”改为“disasters”或“events”，这里改为“additions”保留但更正后面的词。原词“eyes, flaws, dry droids”拼写错误，应为“floods, droughts, and dry periods”。

× Yes, I would like to because I'm kind of person who is really in try to travel and travel to different climates will allows me to experience more different mode different. A culture and lifestyle.

✓ Yes, I would like to because I'm the kind of person who really likes to travel and traveling to different climates allows me to experience different modes, cultures, and lifestyles.

“I'm kind of person”缺冠词，应为“I'm the kind of person”。“in try to travel”表达错误，应为“likes to travel”。“will allows”主谓不一致，应为“allows”。“more different mode different. A culture and lifestyle”表达混乱，应改为“different modes, cultures, and lifestyles”。