Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有较多语法和词汇错误，表达不够清晰自然。建议注意单词拼写和语法，避免重复和无关内容，回答时要紧扣问题，简洁明了。

例: I live in Beijing, where the weather is often dusty due to sandstorms. I like rainy days because they bring fresh air and make me feel happy.

提案: 回答较为直接，但语法和表达仍有改进空间。建议使用更准确的连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I prefer cold weather because I find hot weather uncomfortable. In summer, I have to use the air conditioner all the time, which I don't like.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，建议加强语法基础，使用恰当的词汇表达具体原因，避免模糊表达。

例: I definitely prefer wet weather like rain and snow because my skin feels better in these conditions. That's why I hope to live in a coastal city in the future.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和表达不够准确。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，表达更清晰自然。

例: I don't usually check the weather forecast, but I do if I have important plans like going out with friends or exams. I enjoy the surprise of the weather, even if it means sometimes forgetting my umbrella on rainy days.

提案: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议加强句子结构练习，使用准确词汇，逻辑清晰地表达观点。

例: I believe human activities are the main cause of climate change. Recently, many cities have experienced extreme weather like floods and droughts due to global warming.

提案: 回答表达有语法和词汇错误，建议注意句子连贯性和词汇准确性，避免拼写错误，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, definitely. I enjoy exploring cities with different climates, especially coastal ones. For example, I once visited Perth, which is humid and has mild summers. I hope to live there someday.

× The city is full of sandstorm and always Troy so I like the reigning becauses rays can bring some fresh air and it can also makes me feel happy.

✓ The city is full of sandstorms and always dry, so I like the rain because rays can bring some fresh air and it can also make me feel happy.

sandstorm 应该用复数形式 sandstorms，因为表示多次或多种沙尘暴。makes 应改为 make，因为主语是 it，后面是 can，情态动词后动词用原形。

× The city is full of sandstorm and always Troy so I like the reigning becauses rays can bring some fresh air and it can also makes me feel happy.

✓ The city is full of sandstorms and always dry, so I like the rain because rays can bring some fresh air and it can also make me feel happy.

always 后面应接形容词 dry，而不是错误的 Troy。reigning 应为 rain，词汇错误。

× The city is full of sandstorm and always Troy so I like the reigning becauses rays can bring some fresh air and it can also makes me feel happy.

✓ The city is full of sandstorms and always dry, so I like the rain because rays can bring some fresh air and it can also make me feel happy.

becauses 应为 because，连词拼写错误。

× Well, I like cold weather better becauses I'm scared of hot weather, you know, in summer I must open the air condition there all the time.

✓ Well, I like cold weather better because I'm scared of hot weather, you know, in summer I must turn on the air conditioner all the time.

becauses 拼写错误，应为 because。air condition 应为 air conditioner，词汇错误。

× The hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ The hot weather makes me feel uncomfortable.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Oh I definitely prefer wet weather likes rainy and snowy because my skin doesn't like drivers or is can correct in this conditions.

✓ Oh I definitely prefer wet weather like rainy and snowy because my skin doesn't like dryness or it can't be correct in these conditions.

likes 应为 like，动词与主语不一致。drivers 应为 dryness，词汇错误。is can correct 结构错误，应改为 it can't be correct。conditions 前应加定冠词 these。

× Oh I definitely prefer wet weather likes rainy and snowy because my skin doesn't like drivers or is can correct in this conditions.

✓ Oh I definitely prefer wet weather like rainy and snowy because my skin doesn't like dryness or it can't be correct in these conditions.

is can correct 语法错误，主语应为 it，且情态动词后动词用原形。conditions 前应加定冠词 these。

× So that's why I love to live in the seaside city in the future.

✓ So that's why I love to live in a seaside city in the future.

seaside city 前应加不定冠词 a，因为泛指一个海边城市。

× Now I don't have this habit, I only check the weather forecast if if I have something important in next days, such as going out with my friends or having some exams.

✓ Now I don't have this habit, I only check the weather forecast if I have something important in the next few days, such as going out with my friends or having some exams.

重复使用 if if，应删去一个。next days 前应加定冠词 the 和数量词 few。

× Actually, I like the surprise of weather, even though it's means that sometimes I must forget my umbrella of an Icos are raining days.

✓ Actually, I like the surprise of the weather, even though it means that sometimes I must forget my umbrella on rainy days.

it's means 应为 it means，去掉多余的 's'。umbrella of an Icos are raining days 结构混乱，应改为 umbrella on rainy days。weather 前应加定冠词 the。

× Actually, I like the surprise of weather, even though it's means that sometimes I must forget my umbrella of an Icos are raining days.

✓ Actually, I like the surprise of the weather, even though it means that sometimes I must forget my umbrella on rainy days.

weather 前应加定冠词 the，因为特指天气。

× In recent years, more and more city prudently to the extreme weather like flooding and droughts in some area and countries an mean well the global warming and bring house are also makes the weather become extremely.

✓ In recent years, more and more cities are prone to extreme weather like flooding and droughts in some areas and countries, which means global warming and greenhouse gases also make the weather become extreme.

city 应用复数 cities。prudently 用词错误，应为 are prone to。area 应用复数 areas。an mean well 应为 which means。bring house 应为 greenhouse gases。makes 应为 make，主语复数。extremely 应为形容词 extreme。

× In recent years, more and more city prudently to the extreme weather like flooding and droughts in some area and countries an mean well the global warming and bring house are also makes the weather become extremely.

✓ In recent years, more and more cities are prone to extreme weather like flooding and droughts in some areas and countries, which means global warming and greenhouse gases also make the weather become extreme.

proudently 应为 are prone to，正确搭配介词。

× In recent years, more and more city prudently to the extreme weather like flooding and droughts in some area and countries an mean well the global warming and bring house are also makes the weather become extremely.

✓ In recent years, more and more cities are prone to extreme weather like flooding and droughts in some areas and countries, which means global warming and greenhouse gases also make the weather become extreme.

an mean well 应为 which means，指代不清且语法错误。

× Yes, definitely. I like exploring the city that is different from very leave, especially the city near the coast.

✓ Yes, definitely. I like exploring cities that are different from where I live, especially cities near the coast.

city 应用复数 cities，因为指多个城市。is 应改为 are，主谓一致。very leave 应为 where I live，词汇错误。

× Yes, definitely. I like exploring the city that is different from very leave, especially the city near the coast.

✓ Yes, definitely. I like exploring cities that are different from where I live, especially cities near the coast.

different from 后应接地点状语 where I live，而非 very leave。

× Once I went to Perth, the city is humid, the summer is not too hot.

✓ Once I went to Perth, the city was humid, and the summer was not too hot.

时态应保持一致，描述过去经历时用过去时 was。

× So when there is not a code and I hope I can live here in the future.

✓ So when there is no cold, I hope I can live here in the future.

there is not a code 应为 there is no cold，拼写错误且表达不当。and 连接不当，应分句。