Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về thời tiết nơi bạn sống.

例: The weather in my city is quite humid. It usually stays humid from January to November each year.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời hiện tại có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả của câu trả lời.

例: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy staying indoors, reading books, and listening to music. It makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời giải thích lý do cụ thể cho sở thích của mình.

例: I prefer dry weather because it makes me feel more comfortable. For example, in December, I can go shopping without worrying about getting wet.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa bị mất. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích tần suất cũng như lý do kiểm tra dự báo thời tiết.

例: I don't check the weather forecast regularly. I only check it sometimes when I have plans to go outside.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và cung cấp các ví dụ cụ thể về ảnh hưởng của biến đổi khí hậu.

例: In recent years, climate change has affected the environment and human life. For example, we have seen more extreme weather events like storms and droughts.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng về mong muốn của mình khi đến thăm các thành phố có khí hậu khác, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to experience colder weather than what I have in my city.

× In my city the weather it has an humid.

✓ In my city, the weather is humid.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'an' before 'humid' and has an unnecessary pronoun 'it'. The correct form is 'the weather is humid' because 'weather' is singular and requires the verb 'is'. Also, 'humid' is an adjective and does not need an article before it.

× I'm the host to January from my the humid to November.

✓ It is humid from January to November.

The phrase 'I'm the host to January from my the humid to November' is incorrect and unclear. The correct prepositions are 'from January to November' to indicate the time period. Also, 'I'm the host' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'It is humid'.

× I like how weather when I stay in.

✓ I like the weather when I stay in.

The phrase 'how weather' is incorrect; it should be 'the weather'. 'How' is not appropriate here as a determiner for 'weather'.

× I enjoy staying at my home in a book and listening to music.

✓ I enjoy staying at home, reading a book, and listening to music.

The phrase 'staying at my home in a book' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'at home' without 'my'. Also, 'in a book' should be 'reading a book' to express the activity.

× I feel relax in comfort table.

✓ I feel relaxed and comfortable.

'Relax' is a verb; the adjective form 'relaxed' should be used. 'Comfort table' is incorrect; likely intended 'comfortable'. The sentence should express feelings using adjectives.

× I prefer the right become isn't.

✓ I prefer dry weather.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning seems to be a preference for dry weather. 'The right become isn't' is not grammatically correct.

× Help me feel comfort rible for December I can I'll try.

✓ It helps me feel comfortable in December, so I can try.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words like 'comfort rible'. The correct adjective is 'comfortable'. Also, the sentence needs proper structure and pronouns.

× In working a shopping without worry about getting wet.

✓ I can work or go shopping without worrying about getting wet.

The phrase 'In working a shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'work or go shopping'. Also, 'worry' should be 'worrying' after 'without'.

× No sometime and check the weather forecast when I have a chump I wish chest.

✓ No, sometimes I check the weather forecast when I have a chance or wish to check.

The sentence contains incorrect words 'chump' and 'chest' which should be 'chance' and 'check'. Also, 'sometimes' is the correct adverb form, and the sentence needs proper conjunctions.

× In recent year, like my train his his profile effects on the environment in human life.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had significant effects on the environment and human life.

'Year' should be plural 'years' to indicate a period. The sentence also has unclear phrases like 'like my train his his profile' which are corrected to 'climate change has had significant' for clarity.

× Firstly, we have witnessed a small for reviewing and slivered weather eventually emergency.

✓ Firstly, we have witnessed small changes in weather leading to eventual emergencies.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'for reviewing' and 'slivered'. The correction uses appropriate quantifiers and clearer expressions.

× This time around.

✓ This time around,

The phrase 'This time around.' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence or completed to form a full sentence.

× Sometimes I visit Window City. I am my. 50 The weather here how I will train. So it's not.

✓ Sometimes I visit Windy City. I am 50 years old. The weather here is different from where I live, so it's not the same.

The original sentences contain unclear and incorrect phrases like 'I am my. 50' and 'how I will train'. These are corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.