Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，建议简洁明了地描述天气状况，并避免重复。

例: The weather in my city is usually cold, especially during the winter months. It often stays chilly for a long time, which I find quite refreshing.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议用简单句表达喜好，并具体说明原因。

例: I prefer hot weather because I can wear beautiful clothes and enjoy swimming. Also, warm weather makes outdoor activities more comfortable and fun.

提案: 回答内容混乱且重复，建议明确表达喜欢干燥或潮湿天气，并给出具体理由。

例: I prefer dry weather because it is easier to wear nice clothes and play outdoor sports like football with my friends.

提案: 回答不连贯且难以理解，建议直接回答是否习惯查看天气预报，并说明频率和方式。

例: No, I don't usually watch the weather forecast on TV. Instead, I check the weather on my phone app every morning.

提案: 回答简短且表达不完整，建议用完整句子说明气候变化的影响，并举例说明。

例: I think climate change has caused more pollution and global warming, which are serious problems affecting our environment.

提案: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，建议简洁表达愿望并举例说明想去的城市和原因。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I have traveled to Beijing in China, which has a very different weather from my city.

× I think my city wiser is very good because, uh, it's high time along time weather in my city, so I think my city weather is very cold.

✓ I think the weather in my city is very good because it has been cold for a long time, so I think the weather in my city is very cold.

句子中“city wiser”应为“city weather”，且“weather”是不可数名词，不用复数形式。需要调整句子结构使其更通顺。

× I prefer hot sweater because in summer I can wear beautiful clothes and go swimming with I really enjoy.

✓ I prefer hot weather because in summer I can wear beautiful clothes and go swimming, which I really enjoy.

句中“hot sweater”应为“hot weather”，且“go swimming with I really enjoy”结构错误，应改为“go swimming, which I really enjoy”。

× Also Dear went so right her making outdoor activity more comfortable and a friend so I like some.

✓ Also, the warm weather makes outdoor activities more comfortable and fun, so I like it.

句子结构混乱，代词使用错误，应明确主语和宾语，调整为正确表达。

× Wet weather I prefer hot weather because in summer I can rinse beautiful dress and the two swimming with I really enjoy also there when we were there making out the activity Morken football and friends.

✓ I prefer hot weather over wet weather because in summer I can wear beautiful dresses and go swimming, which I really enjoy. Also, when the weather is good, I can do outdoor activities like playing football with friends.

句中“rinse beautiful dress”应为“wear beautiful dresses”，“dress”需用复数形式，且句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× No, I don't like her watching a. Wait her shot that is traditional or in TV I like her a watching Oh my phone on this is knew oh weather shows is coming.

✓ No, I don't like watching the weather forecast on traditional TV. I prefer watching weather shows on my phone because they are new and updated.

句中“her watching a. Wait her shot”无意义，代词使用错误，应改为“I don't like watching...”。

× I think charging. In. Add to pollution and the global, global warming, yes. So I think it's a very important things.

✓ I think climate change adds to pollution and global warming. Yes, so I think it's a very important issue.

句子结构混乱，需调整为完整句子，表达清晰。

× Yes, because I very like hard the how do we in her city of for example, I already, uh, too and you not to travel or in China. This is a very. In. Very housewives her I saw.

✓ Yes, because I really like how the weather is in other cities. For example, I have traveled to some places in China. They have very different climates from where I live.

句子中代词和词语使用错误，句子不通顺，需要重组表达。