Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免拼写错误。

例: I prefer dry weather because it keeps my clothes clean and makes me feel comfortable. When it rains, I get annoyed because my shoes get muddy.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够自然。建议使用简单句子表达喜好，并说明原因，避免重复和不连贯。

例: I prefer cold weather because I can stay warm under a cozy blanket and relax in bed. I don't like very hot weather because it makes me uncomfortable.

提案: 回答有语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，表达更具体的理由，使回答更自然流畅。

例: I prefer dry weather because it keeps my clothes dry and makes me feel clean and comfortable. This helps me stay in a good mood.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议简化句子，明确说明习惯和频率，使用正确的时态和词汇。

例: I always check the weather forecast on my phone before going out. This helps me decide what to wear and whether to take an umbrella.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，语法和词汇错误较多。建议先明确气候变化的影响，再用简单句表达观点，避免拼写错误。

例: Climate change has caused unusual weather, making it hard to decide what to wear. Sometimes it rains unexpectedly, so I always carry an umbrella.

提案: 回答中有拼写和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议用简单句表达愿望和理由，避免复杂词汇错误。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because it helps me learn new things and experience different cultures.

× I like drier weather course in this occasion where I can avoid my clothes be muddied and shoes be 30 which can set me in lighter mode and if Microsoft is worth 30 I will get annoyed.

✓ I like drier weather because on such occasions I can avoid my clothes getting muddied and my shoes getting dirty, which can put me in a lighter mood, and if the weather is wet, I will get annoyed.

句中动词形式错误，'be muddied'和'shoes be 30'应使用现在分词形式表示状态的持续，改为'getting muddied'和'getting dirty'。此外，'course'应为'because'，'lighter mode'应为'lighter mood'，'Microsoft is worth 30'应为'the weather is wet'。

× I like cold weather because in the cold occasion I can sweet lot and I just stay in my bed and cozy blanket can make me feel very cozy which can set me in myteam mode. Avoid law scorching hot.

✓ I like cold weather because on cold occasions I can sweat a lot and just stay in my bed, and a cozy blanket can make me feel very comfortable, which can put me in my team mode. I avoid scorching hot weather.

'sweet lot'应为'sweat a lot'，动词形式错误。'Avoid law scorching hot'句子结构不完整，改为完整句子'I avoid scorching hot weather'。

× I prefer dry weather instead of the wet weather which came. Makes me feel more safe and comfortable in the dry weather to maintain my clothes dry and body cleaning which can set my good mood.

✓ I prefer dry weather instead of wet weather because it makes me feel safer and more comfortable. Dry weather helps me keep my clothes dry and my body clean, which can improve my mood.

'instead of the wet weather which came'表达不清，改为'instead of wet weather because it makes me feel safer'。'more safe'应为'safer'，形容词比较级错误。'body cleaning'应为'my body clean'。

× I indulge in the habit of checking weather forecast every time before I going out to watch the apps to weather forecast without fail, which can makes me safely to decide they want to take and whether to take the umbrella in the.

✓ I have the habit of checking the weather forecast every time before I go out by using apps without fail, which helps me decide what to wear and whether to take an umbrella.

'before I going out'应为'before I go out'，动词时态错误。'makes me safely to decide they want to take'表达不正确，改为'helps me decide what to wear'。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Recently a climbing changes very unreasonable which can make some feel annoyed and comed to deciding what to wear in the wet weather to take a umbrella when I going out I think. No climbing training is very exhaustible thing for me.

✓ Recently, climate changes have been very unreasonable, which can make some people feel annoyed and confused about deciding what to wear in wet weather and whether to take an umbrella when going out. I think climate change is a very exhausting issue for me.

'a climbing changes'应为'climate changes'，名词错误。'comed to deciding'应为'confused about deciding'，词汇错误。'when I going out'应为'when going out'，动词形式错误。'No climbing training'应为'climate change'。

× Yes, I am a challenge people to embrace the difference climbing from other cities, which can enhance my product tivity and satisfy my curiosity for other cities. I think it is a good choice to touch the other culture in the other countries.

✓ Yes, I am a person who challenges myself to embrace the different climates from other cities, which can enhance my productivity and satisfy my curiosity about other cities. I think it is a good choice to experience other cultures in other countries.

'I am a challenge people'表达错误，应为'I am a person who challenges myself'。'difference climbing'应为'different climates'。'product tivity'拼写错误，应为'productivity'。'touch the other culture'表达不当，应为'experience other cultures'。