Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法和拼写错误，且表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，避免拼写错误，并且简洁明了地描述天气特点。

例: There are four seasons in my city. In spring, the weather is warm and mostly sunny. Summer is hot and humid, while autumn is cool. Winter is cold. So, my city experiences various types of weather.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，清楚表达你的偏好和原因。

例: I prefer cold weather because we can wear warm clothes to stay comfortable. However, hot weather is often uncomfortable and limits outdoor activities.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用连贯的句子，正确使用连接词，并具体说明原因。

例: I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable and refreshing, especially when I am outside. On the other hand, wet weather often makes people feel sleepy and less active.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明习惯和频率，注意动词形式和词汇使用。

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because I go out for school or outdoor activities. I usually check it in the morning before I leave.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构，清楚描述气候变化的影响。

例: I have noticed significant climate change in recent years. Summers have become extremely hot, so I have to use the air conditioner every day. The temperature is getting higher and higher.

提案: 回答较好，但有些句子结构重复。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. I learned about various climates in geography class, and as a curious person, I want to experience local customs and meet new people. It would be both educational and exciting.

× While in my place there are Four Seasons and in spring it's warm an mostly sunny and in summer is hot and humid and in Alton the weather is cool an emitter is cold.

✓ While in my place there are four seasons, and in spring it's warm and mostly sunny, in summer it is hot and humid, and in autumn the weather is cool and winter is cold.

这里存在复数和单数的错误，例如“Four Seasons”应为“四个季节”，且季节名称应小写；“in summer is hot”缺少主语，应为“in summer it is hot”；“Alton”应为“autumn”，“emitter”应为“winter”。需要注意季节名称的拼写和主谓一致。

× So there are worriers types of weather in my city.

✓ So there are various types of weather in my city.

“worriers”拼写错误，应为“various”，表示“各种各样的”。此外，“types”是复数，前面用“there are”正确。

× I prefer cold weather because when the weather is cold we can put up new closes to awhile to avoid the cold temperature, but when it is hard it's usually not very comfortable and there's nothing to do with it.

✓ I prefer cold weather because when the weather is cold we can put on new clothes for a while to avoid the cold temperature, but when it is hot it's usually not very comfortable and there's nothing to do with it.

“put up new closes”应为“put on new clothes”，表示穿上新衣服；“awhile”应为“for a while”，表示一段时间；“hard”应为“hot”，形容天气热。需要注意词汇的正确使用和搭配。

× I prefer dry weather because dry weather is more comfortable for us and it can give me a refreshing feeling when especially when we are outside.

✓ I prefer dry weather because dry weather is more comfortable for us and it can give me a refreshing feeling, especially when we are outside.

“when especially when”重复，应去掉一个“when”，使句子更通顺。

× But so wet weather off and make people feel sleepy and tired and make people less active.

✓ But wet weather often makes people feel sleepy and tired and makes people less active.

“so wet weather off”不合语法，应为“wet weather often”，表示“湿润的天气经常”；动词需与主语一致，使用第三人称单数形式“makes”。

× Yes I am, because I usually need to go out every day either to go to school or to doing outdoor activities.

✓ Yes I am, because I usually need to go out every day either to go to school or to do outdoor activities.

“to doing”错误，动词不定式“to”后应接动词原形“do”，而非动名词“doing”。

× So I need to check up whether regularly and I usually check out weather in the morning of the day before I go out and I think it's every day I do it.

✓ So I need to check the weather regularly and I usually check the weather in the morning of the day before I go out, and I think I do it every day.

“check up whether”错误，应为“check the weather”；“check out weather”应为“check the weather”；句子结构混乱，需调整顺序使表达清晰。

× I experienced significance climate change in recent years, especially during the summer because the summer they knew recent years is is extremely hard and I have to stay up the air conditioner everyday.

✓ I have experienced significant climate change in recent years, especially during the summer because the summers in recent years have been extremely hot and I have to use the air conditioner every day.

“experienced significance climate change”应为“have experienced significant climate change”，形容词“significant”修饰名词“climate change”；“the summer they knew recent years is is extremely hard”语法混乱，应改为“the summers in recent years have been extremely hot”；“stay up the air conditioner”错误，应为“use the air conditioner”；“everyday”应为“every day”，前者为形容词，后者为副词。

× Yes, I would too. Yes, I would like to do that because I have learned about other climates in geography class and I'm quite a curious person.

✓ Yes, I would too. I would like to do that because I have learned about other climates in geography class and I'm quite a curious person.

“Yes, I would too.”重复，第二句中“Yes”多余，应去掉以避免重复。

× I would like to know about the local habits and local people, and it was an educational and exciting experience for me.

✓ I would like to know about the local habits and local people, and it would be an educational and exciting experience for me.

前半句为表达愿望，使用“would like”，后半句应保持时态一致，使用“would be”而非过去时“was”。