Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有多处发音和用词错误。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

例: The weather where I live has four distinct seasons. Spring and autumn are windy, summer is hot, and winter is cold. The scenery during these seasons is very beautiful.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但语法错误较多，如动词形式和连词使用不当。建议注意动词的正确形式和连接词的使用，使表达更流畅自然。

例: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy outdoor activities like hiking and picnics. Hot weather is more suitable for these activities.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，句子断裂影响理解。建议练习连贯表达，使用完整句子，并注意词汇拼写和发音。

例: I prefer dry weather. For example, I like to go hiking or have a picnic when the weather is dry because it is more comfortable and safe.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用正确的时态和词汇。

例: Actually, I check the weather forecast every day. I usually use weather apps on my phone to decide whether to take an umbrella or wear a jacket.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清楚地说明气候变化的影响。

例: In recent years, climate change has made the weather more extreme. This has seriously affected farmers because prolonged heat and heavy rain damage crops, leading to lower harvests.

提案: 回答中时态使用错误，句子不完整且表达不流畅。建议注意时态一致，使用完整句子，并丰富细节。

例: Of course, I am a big fan of traveling. For example, I would love to visit northern cities where it snows because it does not snow in my city.

× The weather where I live. Is temporary rate.

✓ The weather where I live is temporary.

句子结构错误，原句中断句不完整，导致表达不清。应将两个部分合并成完整句子。

× Weather on it has Four Seasons, and the spring and autumn was wind in the summer was hot.

✓ The weather here has four seasons: spring and autumn are windy, and summer is hot.

介词使用错误，'on it'不合适，应直接说明地点。

× spring and autumn was wind in the summer was hot.

✓ spring and autumn are windy, and summer is hot.

时态错误，描述常态应使用一般现在时。

× On the winter was cold.

✓ In winter, it is cold.

时态错误，描述常态应使用一般现在时。

× And skate. Scan the RE is beautiful.

✓ And the scenery is beautiful.

句子结构混乱，单词拼写错误，导致句意不明。

× I prefer hot weather be 'cause I'd love to doing outdoor activities like hiking or picnic.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I'd love to do outdoor activities like hiking or picnics.

情态动词后应接动词原形，doing应改为do。

× I think the hot weather is suitable to do these things.

✓ I think hot weather is suitable for doing these things.

搭配错误，suitable后应接介词for。

× I preferred try weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather.

时态错误，描述习惯用一般现在时。

× I'd love to. Go hiking or picnic in. Installing Weather.

✓ I'd love to go hiking or have a picnic in dry weather.

介词使用错误，'in installing weather'不合适，应为'dry weather'。

× And dry weather is. Best to do these things.

✓ And dry weather is best for doing these things.

句子结构不完整，缺少介词和动词形式。

× Actually I checked the weather forecast every day.

✓ Actually, I check the weather forecast every day.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时。

× I I always use the weather apps on my phone to a no today with I.

✓ I always use weather apps on my phone to know today's weather.

句子结构混乱，单词拼写错误，导致句意不明。

× Where I take the umbrella roar.

✓ When I need to, I take an umbrella.

代词使用错误，句子不完整且含义不清。

× I wear a jacket.

✓ I wear a jacket.

此句无错误。

× In recent years, climate change has caused the weather to become much harder and harder.

✓ In recent years, climate change has caused the weather to become more extreme.

表达不准确，'harder and harder'用词不当，应使用more extreme。

× It has serious affect, farmers becaused.

✓ It has serious effects on farmers because

名词复数形式错误，affect应为effects。

× Or extend heat and rain form damage later crops leading to lower harvest.

✓ Extreme heat and rain damage crops, leading to lower harvests.

句子结构混乱，单词拼写错误，导致句意不明。

× Of course I did.

✓ Of course I do.

描述喜好应使用一般现在时。

× I'm really big fan to travel and for example I'd love to go to the other city like the northern city because it may snow an my city is not to snow.

✓ I'm really a big fan of travel, and for example, I'd love to go to another city like a northern city because it may snow there, but it doesn't snow in my city.

介词使用错误，big fan后应接of，其他介词和冠词使用不当。

× I'd love to.

✓ I'd love to.

此句无错误，但上下文不完整。