Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有较多语法和词汇错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，避免拼写错误，并且回答要简洁明了。

例: The weather in my city is quite dry, and I prefer this kind of dry weather because it feels comfortable.

提案: 回答中存在大量发音和词汇错误，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单清晰的句子表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel cozy. I can stay at home comfortably and watch TV, but in hot weather, it's difficult to go outside.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，词汇使用不当。建议完整回答问题，使用准确词汇，并且句子结构清晰。

例: I definitely prefer dry weather because it makes the environment feel clean. Humidity makes me uncomfortable and my skin oily, so I don't like wet weather.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清楚的问题。建议用简单句子直接回答问题，并说明具体情况。

例: I don't often check the weather forecast because I can usually tell the weather by looking outside. But if I have important plans, I will check it.

提案: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不完整。建议用完整句子描述具体变化，并使用连接词使表达连贯。

例: I think the effects of climate change are obvious. Winters have become warmer, springs are shorter, and summers are much hotter than before.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议用简单句子表达自己的偏好，并说明原因。

例: I prefer to visit cities with the same dry weather as mine because I don't like humid weather. So I would choose dry cities to visit.

× Actually in my city's the wiser is quite dry, but there are many Sundays so I prefer like this dryad something day.

✓ Actually, in my city the weather is quite dry, but there are many sunny days so I prefer this kind of dry weather.

这里's the wiser 是错误的单复数用法，应该是 the weather。Sundays 应该是 sunny days，表示晴天。单复数错误导致句子意思不清楚。建议区分单数和复数名词的正确形式。

× Personally, I prefer the cold wiser because I think the Cowboys are can makes you feel chuan cozy.

✓ Personally, I prefer the cold weather because I think the cold weather can make you feel cozy.

wiser 应为 weather，Cowboys 是错误的单词，应该是 cold weather。makes 应改为 make，因为主语是 can，后面动词用原形。单复数和动词形式错误。建议注意名词和动词的正确拼写和形式。

× You can just stay in the home comfort ubly and what were some TV shows but in the Haut wiser that it's very difficult to go outside.

✓ You can just stay comfortably at home and watch some TV shows, but in hot weather it's very difficult to go outside.

in the home comfort ubly 是错误表达，应该是 stay comfortably at home。what were some TV shows 应为 watch some TV shows。Haut wiser 应为 hot weather。介词和词汇使用错误。建议学习常用短语和介词搭配。

× Uhm, dry wiser definitely you know the driveways are can make me feel like a very clean and clear because sometimes the moisture and humidity always giving me a uncomfortable feelings like my air always get oily very first.

✓ Uhm, dry weather definitely can make me feel very clean and clear because sometimes moisture and humidity always give me uncomfortable feelings like my skin gets oily very quickly.

wiser 应为 weather，driveways 是错误词，应为 weather。are can 是错误搭配，应去掉 are。a uncomfortable feelings 单复数不一致，应为 uncomfortable feelings。air 应为 skin。单复数和词汇错误较多。建议注意单复数和词汇准确使用。

× To be honest, I don't often check the wiser for both cars because I think I just you know which outside and to predict wiser is it.

✓ To be honest, I don't often check the weather forecast because I think I can just look outside to predict the weather.

for both cars 是错误表达，应为 weather forecast。which outside 应为 look outside。to predict wiser is it 语序错误，应为 predict the weather。情态动词和词序错误。建议学习情态动词用法和正确语序。

× Uhm, actually I sync these are some effects are super obvious, such as I felt in recent years, the winter become warmer and the spring becomes shorter and more than that, I think the summer is Tremblay Haut.

✓ Uhm, actually I think some effects are super obvious, such as in recent years, the winter has become warmer and the spring has become shorter. More than that, I think the summer is terribly hot.

sync 应为 think。felt 用错，应该用现在完成时 has become 表示最近变化。become 应用第三人称单数 becomes。Tremblay Haut 拼写错误，应为 terribly hot。时态和拼写错误。建议注意时态和拼写准确。

× To be honest, I prefer to visit another place, had the same joy wiser, because you know, in the source in part of China the wiser is quite humidity, but I don't like that feeling.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to visit another place that has the same dry weather, because you know, in the southern part of China the weather is quite humid, but I don't like that feeling.

had 应为 has。joy wiser 应为 dry weather。source 应为 southern。humidity 应为 humid。单复数和词汇错误。建议注意词汇拼写和单复数形式。