Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法和拼写错误，如“leave”应为“live”，“Troy”应为“tropical”，“raining season”应为“rainy season”，“effects”应为“affects”。建议注意基本语法和拼写，确保表达清晰自然。

例: The place where I live has tropical weather, especially in the summer. However, we also get some rain during the rainy season. So it's important to have a rain barrel to collect water. This kind of weather affects how people plan their daily activities.

提案: 回答中句子不完整且有拼写错误，如“Which I find comfortable”应与前句合并，“code whether”应为“cold weather”，“where we are enclosing sweaters”表达不清。建议注意句子完整性和准确表达。

例: I prefer cold weather because it allows me to wear more layers of clothing, which I find comfortable. For example, during summer weekends, I often feel too hot and want to wear as little as possible, but in cold weather, I can enjoy wearing sweaters.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法错误和拼写错误，如“wet better”应为“wet weather”，“I. Find”应为“I find”，“ear”应为“air”，“raining day”应为“rainy day”，“in more comfortable”应为“and more comfortable”，“Collect dry weather”无意义。建议加强语法和拼写练习，确保表达连贯。

例: I prefer wet weather because I find it refreshing and it helps to cool down the air. For example, after a rainy day, the environment feels cleaner and more comfortable. Also, wet weather can make me feel relaxed and calm compared to dry weather.

提案: 回答较为完整，但“market might rain”应为“it might rain”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，避免用词错误影响表达。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning, especially in the summer. For example, if I see that it might rain tomorrow, I make sure to bring an umbrella with me to stay dry. This helps me plan my day better and avoid getting caught in bad weather.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“effect”应为“effects”，“have”应与主语一致，“I often seen use”表达不清。建议加强语法和表达准确性。

例: For me, the effects of climate change have become more noticeable in recent years. For example, I often see news on my phone about extreme weather events like floods and heat waves in different countries. These changes show how global warming is affecting the environment worldwide.

提案: 回答中有严重拼写和表达错误，如“IDP nacelles of tournament”无意义，句子断裂。建议注意句子连贯性和准确表达，避免无意义词汇。

例: Yes, I would love to visit other cities that have a different climate from where I live. For example, I want to visit tropical places where it is usually quite humid and warm. I would also like to visit Beijing because it has a much drier and cooler climate.

× The place where I leave you really have Troy weather, especially in the summer.

✓ The place where I live really has dry weather, especially in the summer.

这里的主语是单数的“The place”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”，而不是“have”。另外，“leave”应为“live”，“Troy”应为“dry”。

× However, we also get some rain during the raining season.

✓ However, we also get some rain during the rainy season.

“raining”是现在分词，形容词应使用“rainy”来修饰“season”。

× This kind of weather effects how people plan their daily activities.

✓ This kind of weather affects how people plan their daily activities.

“weather”是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“affects”，而不是“effects”。

× Which I find comfortable.

✓ I find it comfortable.

该句为不完整句，应改为完整句子。

× For example, during summer weekends I often feel too hot, then want to wear as little as possible, but in code whether I can enjoy where we are enclosing sweaters.

✓ For example, during summer weekends I often feel too hot and want to wear as little as possible, but in cold weather I can enjoy wearing sweaters.

“code whether”应为“cold weather”，“enclosing”应为“wearing”，句子结构混乱，需调整连接词和词序。

× I prefer wet better because I. Find it refreshing and it helps to cool down the ear.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I find it refreshing and it helps to cool down the air.

“wet better”应为“wet weather”，“ear”应为“air”，句中有多处拼写错误。

× For example, after a raining day, the environment feels cleaner in more comfortable.

✓ For example, after a rainy day, the environment feels cleaner and more comfortable.

“raining day”应为“rainy day”，连接词“in”应为“and”。

× Also, wet weather can make me feel relaxed and calm. Collect dry weather.

✓ Also, wet weather can make me feel relaxed and calm. I dislike dry weather.

“Collect dry weather”无意义，应改为表达反义的完整句子。

× For me, the effect of climate change have become more noticeable in recent years.

✓ For me, the effects of climate change have become more noticeable in recent years.

“effect”应为复数“effects”，与复数谓语“have”保持一致。

× For example, I often seen use on my phone about extreme weather events like floods and heat waves in different countries.

✓ For example, I often see news on my phone about extreme weather events like floods and heat waves in different countries.

“seen”是过去分词，句中应使用一般现在时“see”，且“use”应为“news”。

× Yes, I would love to visit other cities that have a different climate from where I lived, for example IDP nacelles of tournament where it is usually quite humid.

✓ Yes, I would love to visit other cities that have a different climate from where I live, for example places like Da Nang where it is usually quite humid.

“lived”应为现在时“live”，且“IDP nacelles of tournament”应为正确地名“Da Nang”。