Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer should be more natural and clear. Try to use correct adjectives and avoid repetition. For example, instead of saying 'not so cool, cold not so hard', you can say 'The weather is mild and pleasant most of the time.' Also, avoid repeating 'the weather' too many times.

例: The weather where I live is usually mild and pleasant. It is neither too hot nor too cold, which makes it comfortable throughout the year.

提案: Try to speak clearly and use correct vocabulary. For example, 'gold weatherby' is unclear; you probably meant 'cold weather'. Also, organize your answer with linking words and avoid repetition. Use simple sentences to express your ideas clearly.

例: I prefer cold weather because it makes me feel energetic. Although we need to wear more clothes, I enjoy the cool temperature more than hot weather, which makes me feel lazy.

提案: Your answer is good but try to improve sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about why you like wet weather.

例: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the sound and smell of rain. After it rains, the air feels fresh and the environment looks clear and beautiful.

提案: Your answer is unclear and has many grammar mistakes. Try to organize your ideas logically and use correct verb forms. For example, say 'I check the weather forecast every day before I travel to know if it will rain or be sunny.'

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day before I go out. If it is going to rain, I make sure to take my raincoat with me.

提案: Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. For example, 'favor' should be 'fever'. Also, explain the effects more specifically and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your points.

例: Global warming is increasing every year, causing many health problems. People suffer from illnesses like cold and fever, and pollution is also getting worse because of climate change.

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more organized. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. For example, say 'Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to experience how it feels and learn to adapt.'

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. It would be interesting to experience new weather and see how I can adjust to different environments.

× The weather where I live is normal, not so cool, cold not so hard.

✓ The weather where I live is normal, not so cool, and the cold is not so harsh.

The phrase 'cold not so hard' is incorrect because 'hard' is not the appropriate adjective to describe cold weather. The correct adjective is 'harsh' or 'severe'. Also, the sentence lacks conjunction 'and' to connect the two clauses properly.

× I like the weather where I live and the weather is so much good.

✓ I like the weather where I live and the weather is very good.

The phrase 'so much good' is incorrect. 'Good' is an adjective and should be modified by 'very' instead of 'so much'. 'So much' is used with uncountable nouns or verbs, not adjectives.

× I mostly like gold weatherby 'cause I feel so much innergetic in cold weather but when I when it is hot weather I feel so lazy and it it didn't get me to do work cold weather it's so much enjoyable.

✓ I mostly like cold weather because I feel very energetic in cold weather, but when it is hot weather, I feel lazy and it doesn't motivate me to work. Cold weather is very enjoyable.

Several errors: 'gold weatherby' should be 'cold weather because' (spelling and preposition). 'Innergetic' is misspelled; correct is 'energetic'. 'Didn't get me to do work' is incorrect; correct is 'doesn't motivate me to work'. 'So much enjoyable' should be 'very enjoyable' as 'enjoyable' is an adjective and modified by 'very'.

× However, we should wear so much clothes but actually enjoy.

✓ However, we should wear many clothes but actually enjoy it.

'So much clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is a countable plural noun and should be modified by 'many' instead of 'so much'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without 'it' at the end to refer to the weather.

× Mostly where I live it there is more much more rain and during well during after rain the weather is so much nice and we can see clear environment.

✓ Mostly where I live, there is much more rain, and during or after rain, the weather is very nice and we can see a clear environment.

The phrase 'it there is more much more rain' is incorrect; correct is 'there is much more rain'. 'So much nice' should be 'very nice' because 'nice' is an adjective. 'Clear environment' needs an article 'a' before it.

× Yes I should travel all all day as so I should check the weather either it rains are it is sunny.

✓ Yes, I travel all day, so I should check the weather whether it rains or it is sunny.

'Should' is incorrectly used here; the speaker means habitual action, so simple present 'travel' is appropriate. 'Either it rains are it is sunny' is incorrect; correct is 'whether it rains or it is sunny'.

× If the weather is raining I sold by picked the raincoat with me.

✓ If it is raining, I should bring the raincoat with me.

'Sold by picked' is incorrect and unclear. The correct modal verb is 'should' and the verb is 'bring' to indicate carrying the raincoat. Also, 'the weather is raining' is incorrect; correct is 'it is raining'.

× And mostly when I take the weather, when I will go to. I will go to.

✓ And mostly, when I go out, I check the weather.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning with proper structure.

× Because of global warming, peoples are suffering from cold and favor and many things the board, the pollution that it creates, it's it's increasing day by day climates.

✓ Because of global warming, people are suffering from cold and fever and many other problems. The pollution it creates is increasing day by day, affecting climates.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'. 'Favor' should be 'fever'. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Yes I like to visit with the cities where there are different climate.

✓ Yes, I like to visit cities where there is a different climate.

'Visit with the cities' is incorrect; 'visit cities' is correct. 'Different climate' is singular, so 'there is' is used instead of 'there are'.

× Also either it's too hot also I can so I think I could survive survive an enjoy the moment if the climate is different.

✓ Also, whether it's too hot or not, I think I could survive and enjoy the moment if the climate is different.

The sentence is confusing and has repeated words. 'Either' should be 'whether' to express condition. 'Survive survive an enjoy' has repetition and misspelling; corrected to 'survive and enjoy'.

× Also I want to visit the how it how I can adjust in diff.

✓ Also, I want to see how I can adjust to different climates.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence provides a clear and grammatically correct structure.