Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Most of the time it is sunny today”不合逻辑，且句子断断续续。建议练习连贯表达，注意时态和句子完整性。

例: The weather in my hometown changes frequently. Usually, it is sunny, but sometimes it rains and becomes cloudy. Occasionally, we experience extreme weather like strong winds.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“build the snowman's”应为“build snowmen”，“the ward”可能是“the world”的误写。建议加强语法和词汇准确性。

例: I prefer cold weather in winter because I enjoy the snow. I can build snowmen with my family and friends. Also, the snow makes the world look very clean and pure.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯，如“our codes are very hard to be dry”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免断句。

例: I prefer dry weather because in wet weather, our clothes are hard to dry, which is very inconvenient. In dry weather, we can go outside easily.

提案: 回答中有表达不清和词汇错误，如“decide what closest to weather”及“except problems like ring”不明确。建议练习表达清晰，使用正确词汇。

例: Yes, I often check the weather forecast, especially before trips with my family or friends. This helps me plan better and prepare for any rain or extreme temperatures during the trip.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“habits”应为“habitats”，“becauses”拼写错误。建议加强语法和词汇准确性。

例: As we know, global temperatures have risen dramatically. This is a very bad trend because many animals, such as polar bears and pigeons, may lose their habitats.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“the Hawaii were often have a hot weather”不正确。建议注意冠词使用和句子结构，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates, such as Hawaii, which often has hot weather. There, I can wear beautiful dresses and take different photos.

× Most of the time it is sunny today.

✓ Most of the time it is sunny.

句子中“Most of the time”表示通常情况，不能与“today”同时使用，因为“today”指特定的今天，时态不匹配。应去掉“today”使句子时态一致。

× And sometimes it becomes raining and.

✓ And sometimes it becomes rainy.

动词“become”后应接形容词，表示状态变化，不能接动名词“raining”。应使用形容词“rainy”来描述天气。

× And sometimes it becomes raining and. Cloudy. Occasionally.

✓ And sometimes it becomes rainy and cloudy occasionally.

原句断句不当，导致语义不连贯，应合并为一句完整句子，保持语义连贯。

× It has some extreme weather, such as the strong wings.

✓ It has some extreme weather, such as strong winds.

“wings”是“翅膀”，应为“winds”（风）。同时“strong”修饰“winds”正确。

× I can build the snowman's with my family and friends.

✓ I can build snowmen with my family and friends.

“snowman's”是单数所有格，错误。应使用复数“snowmen”表示多个雪人。

× Or so the snow makes the ward. Seems to be very clean and the pure.

✓ Also, the snow makes the world seem very clean and pure.

“ward”应为“world”，且句子结构不完整，需调整为完整句子，去掉多余的“the”。

× I prefer dry weather as we know if we live in a wet weather, our codes are.

✓ I prefer dry weather because if we live in wet weather, our clothes are...

“in a wet weather”中“weather”不可数，前面不加冠词“a”。“codes”应为“clothes”。

× our codes are. Very hard to be dry.

✓ our clothes are very hard to keep dry.

“codes”应为“clothes”，且表达更自然应为“keep dry”。

× But in a dry weather, we could go outside easily.

✓ But in dry weather, we can go outside easily.

“weather”不可数，前面不加冠词“a”。“could”改为“can”表示一般事实。

× This helps me plan better and decide what closest to weather according to the weather before doing days.

✓ This helps me plan better and decide what clothes to wear according to the weather before going out.

“what closest to weather”表达不清，应为“what clothes to wear”。“before doing days”错误，应为“before going out”。

× I can avoid or except problems like ring or extreme temperatures during the trip.

✓ I can avoid or expect problems like rain or extreme temperatures during the trip.

“except”用错，应为“expect”。“ring”应为“rain”。

× As we know, the global temperature rise dramatically.

✓ As we know, the global temperature rises dramatically.

主语“temperature”为单数，谓语动词应加-s，使用第三人称单数形式“rises”。

× It is the very bad tendency becauses many animals may lose their habits, such as the polar bears and the pigeons.

✓ It is a very bad trend because many animals may lose their habitats, such as polar bears and penguins.

“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”。“habits”应为“habitats”（栖息地）。“pigeons”应为“penguins”（企鹅），更符合极地动物。

× Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live such as the Hawaii were often have a hot weather.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live, such as Hawaii, which often has hot weather.

“the Hawaii”错误，地名前一般不加冠词。句子结构需调整，“were”应为“which”，动词“have”应为“has”与单数主语一致。

× In this place, I can wear beautiful dresses and take different photos.

✓ In this place, I can wear beautiful dresses and take different photos.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。