Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to speak more clearly and use simple, correct sentences. Focus on directly answering the question with specific details about the weather you like and why.

例: I like the rainy season the most because I enjoy watching the thunder and rain. It makes me feel calm and peaceful, and the air feels fresh after the rain.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain your reasons clearly using simple sentences and linking words.

例: I prefer cold weather because it is comfortable to wear warm clothes. Also, I enjoy going outside when the weather is cool because it is refreshing.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please try to give a direct answer and explain your preference with clear reasons and examples. Avoid unnecessary or confusing words.

例: I prefer wet weather because it helps plants grow and keeps the environment fresh. For example, during the rainy season, the rivers in Bangladesh are full and the land looks green.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house. It helps me decide what to wear and whether to carry an umbrella. For example, if rain is expected, I always take an umbrella to stay dry.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but contains many errors and unclear words. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and give specific examples with linking words.

例: In recent years, climate change has caused more frequent and severe weather events, such as hurricanes and floods. These events have caused serious damage to many countries, including Bangladesh.

提案: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has grammar mistakes. Try to complete your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect sentences.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates from mine. For example, visiting a cold city would allow me to try winter activities like skiing, which I cannot do in my hometown.

× I uh, the weather I like most is the rainy season be 'cause it is the weather when I can see the real brooming of Thunder sky then I can see the rooms of releases orby 'cause it can show us the rain for our meditation and minus so I did.

✓ I uh, the weather I like most is the rainy season because it is the time when I can see the real booming of thunder in the sky, then I can see the rooms of releases orby because it can show us the rain for our meditation and minus so I did.

The phrase 'the rainy season be' is incorrect; 'be' should be replaced with 'because' to show reason. 'There be' issue refers to incorrect use of 'be' verb forms. Here, 'be' is misused instead of 'because'. Use 'because' to express cause or reason.

× I uh, the weather I like most is the rainy season be 'cause it is the weather when I can see the real brooming of Thunder sky then I can see the rooms of releases orby 'cause it can show us the rain for our meditation and minus so I did.

✓ I uh, the weather I like most is the rainy season because it is the weather when I can see the real booming of thunder in the sky then I can see the rooms of releases orby because it can show us the rain for our meditation and minus so I did.

The word 'brooming' is incorrect; the correct present participle form is 'booming'. This is a verb form error where the present participle is misspelled or misused.

× I uh, the weather I like most is the rainy season be 'cause it is the weather when I can see the real brooming of Thunder sky then I can see the rooms of releases orby 'cause it can show us the rain for our meditation and minus so I did.

✓ I uh, the weather I like most is the rainy season because it is the weather when I can see the real booming of thunder in the sky then I can see the rooms of releases orby because it can show us the rain for our meditation and minus so I did.

The phrase 'brooming of Thunder sky' should be 'booming of thunder in the sky'. The preposition 'in' is needed to indicate location. Incorrect preposition use causes confusion about spatial relationships.

× And for me, I prefer cold weather be 'cause when we get are getting in the hot cold weather, then we can fit a new dresses like we can.

✓ And for me, I prefer cold weather because when we are getting in the hot or cold weather, then we can fit new dresses like we can.

The phrase 'get are getting' is incorrect; 'are getting' is the correct present continuous form. Also, 'can fit a new dresses' should be 'can fit new dresses' without 'a' before plural noun. Modal verb 'can' is used correctly but the sentence structure needs correction.

× And for me, I prefer cold weather be 'cause when we get are getting in the hot cold weather, then we can fit a new dresses like we can.

✓ And for me, I prefer cold weather because when we are getting in the hot or cold weather, then we can fit new dresses like we can.

The phrase 'a new dresses' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'dresses' is plural. Remove 'a' to correct the singular/plural mismatch.

× And for me, I prefer cold weather be 'cause when we get are getting in the hot cold weather, then we can fit a new dresses like we can. We can we are forming Grays then why did we go outside then I we eventually we are.

✓ And for me, I prefer cold weather because when we are in hot or cold weather, we can wear new dresses. We can form groups, so why go outside? Eventually, we stay indoors.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness. Sentence structure errors cause confusion and reduce coherence.

× I prefer wait weather becauses when we go outside then I desert then we have eventually look normal back but if I if we do a journey by boot then there's the. Rebar ride country where sorry? Bangladesh is a river.

✓ I prefer wet weather because when we go outside, then I feel like a desert, but eventually we look normal back. If we do a journey by boat, then there's the river ride country. Sorry? Bangladesh is a river.

The phrase 'journey by boot' should be 'journey by boat'. Also, 'wait weather' should be 'wet weather'. Prepositions and word choice errors affect meaning and clarity.

× I prefer wait weather becauses when we go outside then I desert then we have eventually look normal back but if I if we do a journey by boot then there's the. Rebar ride country where sorry? Bangladesh is a river.

✓ I prefer wet weather because when we go outside, I feel like a desert, but eventually we look normal again. If we do a journey by boat, then there's the river ride country. Sorry? Bangladesh is a river.

The pronoun 'I desert' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel like a desert'. Pronouns must be used correctly to convey intended meaning.

× Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning because before leaving the house and I find it helpful to plan my day specially to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella.

✓ Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every morning before leaving the house, and I find it helpful to plan my day, especially to decide what to wear or whether to carry an umbrella.

The sentence is missing proper conjunctions and punctuation. 'Specially' should be 'especially'. Modal verbs are used correctly but sentence flow needs improvement.

× For example, if rain is coming or expected, it makes you too take umbrella for start to dry.

✓ For example, if rain is coming or expected, it makes you take an umbrella to stay dry.

The phrase 'too take umbrella for start to dry' is incorrect. Correct prepositions and articles are needed: 'take an umbrella to stay dry'. Preposition 'to' indicates purpose here.

× In recent years, climate change has had profound effects on our environment and human life. Firstly, we have we tells a more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, flirts drugs which have caused significant damage to our country or worldwide.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had profound effects on our environment and human life. Firstly, we have seen more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes and floods which have caused significant damage to our country and worldwide.

The phrase 'we have we tells' is incorrect; it should be 'we have seen'. Also, 'flirts drugs' is incorrect; likely intended 'floods'. Past tense verb 'seen' is needed to describe past observations.

× Firstly, we have we tells a more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes, flirts drugs which have caused significant damage to our country or worldwide.

✓ Firstly, we have seen more frequent and severe weather events such as hurricanes and floods, which have caused significant damage to our country and worldwide.

The conjunction 'or' should be 'and' to connect 'our country and worldwide'. Also, commas are needed before 'which'. Incorrect conjunction use affects sentence meaning.

× Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climate change from my own becaused experiencing in new climate change such as colder or more tropical environment can be refreshing and exciting.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my own because experiencing new climates such as colder or more tropical environments can be refreshing and exciting.

The phrase 'experiencing in new climate change' is incorrect; 'experiencing new climates' is correct. Prepositions must be used properly to convey meaning.

× Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climate change from my own becaused experiencing in new climate change such as colder or more tropical environment can be refreshing and exciting.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates from my own because experiencing new climates such as colder or more tropical environments can be refreshing and exciting.

The phrase 'different climate change' should be 'different climates' to match plural form. Also, 'environment' should be plural 'environments' to agree with 'climates'.