Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and be more specific about the seasons and weather conditions. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: In Bangkok, the weather is mostly hot throughout the year. Although we have a rainy season, it doesn't rain very often. During winter, it gets cooler but only for a few days.

提案: Focus on clear and correct sentence structure. Avoid unclear words like 'encoder' and improve coherence by using linking words. Explain your preference with specific reasons in a natural way.

例: I prefer hot weather because I don't have to carry a sweater everywhere. It is more comfortable and I can go out without worrying about extra clothes.

提案: Improve pronunciation and spelling of key words like 'dry weather'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference. Make sentences grammatically correct and natural.

例: I prefer dry weather because I don't like feeling sweaty. When the weather is dry, it feels more comfortable and relaxing, and I don't feel sticky or tired.

提案: Try to give a clear and complete answer. Use correct grammar and sentence structure. Explain when and how often you check the weather forecast with specific details.

例: I usually check the weather forecast every morning because the weather in Thailand is often hot and rainy, especially during the rainy season.

提案: Complete your sentences and use correct grammar. Provide specific examples and use linking words to explain the effects of climate change clearly and naturally.

例: I think climate change has made the world hotter, so we have to use air conditioners more often than before, sometimes every day.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more complete. Use correct grammar and linking words. Give specific examples of cities or climates you want to visit and explain why.

例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates, such as snowy places, to experience something new and enjoy the longer nights.

× There are other seasons but is always hot and even if it's raining season but it doesn't rain, that must end.

✓ There are other seasons but it is always hot, and even during the rainy season, it doesn't rain much; that must end.

The sentence lacks the correct form of the verb 'to be' after 'but'. 'Is' should be 'it is' to agree with the subject. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs conjunctions to connect ideas properly.

× In winter it is cold for a few days.

✓ In winter, it is cold for a few days.

A comma after 'In winter' improves clarity. The sentence is grammatically correct regarding singular/plural usage.

× I prefer hot weather because encoder I have to carry the sweater with me anywhere, everywhere and but if it's hard later I don't have to bring my sweater an it just can go out by myself and so have to carry anything to bother my back.

✓ I prefer hot weather because I don't have to carry a sweater with me everywhere, and if it gets cold later, I don't have to bring my sweater; I can just go out by myself without carrying anything to bother my back.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and unclear phrasing. 'Encoder' is likely a mishearing or typo. 'And but' is redundant; use 'and' or 'but' appropriately. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper conjunction use.

× I prefer a drive letter because I don't like feeling sweaty.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I don't like feeling sweaty.

'Drive letter' is a mishearing or typo for 'dry weather'. Correct quantifier and noun needed.

× An when the weather is dry it more convertible an relaxing for me and is not feel sticky or tired at that time.

✓ And when the weather is dry, it is more comfortable and relaxing for me, and I do not feel sticky or tired at that time.

'An' should be 'and'. 'Convertible' is incorrect; 'comfortable' fits the context. The sentence needs proper verb forms and conjunctions.

× Normally I rally check on the weather forecast because in Thailand. Is usually hot an. Like the rain isn't rendered March. It. Almost every day it hot in.

✓ Normally, I really check the weather forecast because in Thailand it is usually hot. The rain doesn't come until March. Almost every day it is hot.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure and punctuation are needed to convey the meaning properly.

× For me climate changs makes our world hotter and hotter an we have to use air conditioner more than in the past.

✓ For me, climate change makes our world hotter and hotter, and we have to use air conditioners more than in the past.

'Changs' should be 'change' (singular). 'Air conditioner' should be plural 'air conditioners' to match general usage.

× Like we have to open it every day. Even in the.

✓ We have to use it every day, even in the cooler seasons.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Open it' is likely 'turn on the air conditioner'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and completeness.

× Is I would like to visit another city which have different climate than.

✓ I would like to visit another city which has a different climate than mine.

'Is' at the beginning is incorrect. 'Have' should be 'has' to agree with singular 'city'. The sentence is completed for clarity.

× An I want to experience something different like Snow Koiter.

✓ And I want to experience something different like snow in winter.

'Snow Koiter' is likely a mishearing of 'snow in winter'. Correct noun usage is needed.

× They delight longer than the night. Is something like.

✓ The days are longer than the nights. It is something like that.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure and vocabulary are needed.