Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法有些错误，如“become”应为“becomes”，且表达略显重复和不够连贯。建议注意动词时态一致，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: The weather where I live is quite changeable. For example, it is extremely hot and rainy during the summer, but in winter, it becomes cold and wet. Despite these changes, I have adapted well, and most people here enjoy the climate.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误（如“code”应为“cold”），句子结构不完整，且表达不够连贯。建议注意拼写准确，使用完整句子，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

例: I prefer cold weather because I find hot weather uncomfortable. The air in summer often feels stuffy, and I tend to sweat a lot, which makes me feel sticky and uneasy. In contrast, cold weather feels refreshing and helps me stay comfortable throughout the day.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误（如“pengbo”不明确，应使用准确词汇），句子断裂，表达不连贯。建议注意句子完整性，使用准确词汇，并保持表达连贯。

例: I prefer wet weather because I have allergic rhinitis. When the air is too dry, my nose feels very uncomfortable when I breathe. In contrast, in wet conditions, I feel more comfortable and better.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误（如“focus”应为“forecast”，“ring”应为“rain”），句子结构不够自然。建议注意拼写，使用更自然的表达方式，并保持句子流畅。

例: Personally, I check the weather forecast regularly. For example, I look at it every morning before going out to see if it will rain that day. If the forecast says yes, I remind myself to bring an umbrella.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（如“annu average”应为“annual average”），句子结构稍显笨拙。建议注意拼写，使用更准确的词汇，并使句子更简洁流畅。

例: In recent years, climate change has caused a rise in the global annual average temperature. This is likely due to increased carbon dioxide emissions. In my opinion, these effects are very negative, and we should take action to address them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和断句不当（如“Never snow in winter”应为完整句子），表达不够连贯。建议注意句子完整性，使用连接词，并保持表达自然流畅。

例: Personally, I am very willing to visit other cities with different climates from where I live. For example, it never snows in my city during winter, so I am curious about what a snowy landscape looks like. Therefore, I have planned to travel to London for a long time.

× It is extremely hot and rainy during summer period.

✓ It is extremely hot and rainy during the summer period.

“summer period”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为这里指特定的季节，需用定冠词。

× When winter comes, the weather become quite cold and wet.

✓ When winter comes, the weather becomes quite cold and wet.

主语“the weather”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“becomes”，否则主谓不一致。

× But I have adapted to it and the people here feel good about it.

✓ But I have adapted to it and the people here feel good about it.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× I prefer code rather because I find.

✓ I prefer cold weather rather because I find

“code”应为“cold”，且句子不完整，缺少后续内容。此处只纠正拼写错误。

× I prefer code rather because I find.

✓ I prefer cold weather rather because I find hot weather uncomfortable.

句子不完整，缺少宾语和原因，需补充完整表达。

× Hot weather uncomfortable.

✓ Hot weather is uncomfortable.

缺少系动词“is”，导致句子不完整。

× The air in summer often feels stuffy and I tend to sweat a lot which makes me feel sticky an uneasy.

✓ The air in summer often feels stuffy and I tend to sweat a lot, which makes me feel sticky and uneasy.

缺少逗号分隔定语从句，且“an”应为“and”，拼写错误。

× In contrast, code rather feels refreshing and help me stay more comfortable throughout the day.

✓ In contrast, cold weather feels refreshing and helps me stay more comfortable throughout the day.

“code”应为“cold”，且主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s。

× I prefer wet weather because I have allergic rhinitis.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I have allergic rhinitis.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× When the air is too dry.

✓ When the air is too dry,

此句为不完整句，应与后文连接或补充完整。

× My nose feels very pengbo when I breathing in the air.

✓ My nose feels very uncomfortable when I breathe in the air.

“pengbo”非英文单词，应改为“uncomfortable”；“breathing”应为动词原形“breathe”，与主语“I”搭配。

× In contrast. In wet condition I feel more comfortable and better.

✓ In contrast, in wet conditions I feel more comfortable and better.

句子断开不连贯，应合并为一句，且“condition”应为复数“conditions”。

× Personally, I will check the weather forecast. Regularly, for example, I will check the weather focus every morning before I go out, mainly to see whether it will ring that day or not.

✓ Personally, I will check the weather forecast regularly. For example, I will check the weather forecast every morning before I go out, mainly to see whether it will rain that day or not.

“weather focus”应为“weather forecast”；“ring”应为“rain”；“Regularly”位置不当，应与前句合并。

× If the forecast said yes, I will remind myself to bring an umbrella with me.

✓ If the forecast says yes, I will remind myself to bring an umbrella with me.

条件句中一般现在时与将来时搭配，故“said”应改为“says”。

× The effects of climate change in recent years is the rise of global annu average temperature.

✓ The effects of climate change in recent years are the rise of global annual average temperature.

主语“effects”是复数，谓语动词应为“are”；“annu average”应为“annual average”。

× It is probably generated by the increasing emission of carbon dioxide, and in my opinion, the facts are very negative and we should do something to change that.

✓ It is probably caused by the increasing emissions of carbon dioxide, and in my opinion, the effects are very negative and we should do something to change that.

“generated”用词不当，应为“caused”；“emission”应为复数“emissions”；“facts”应为“effects”，更符合语境。

× Personally, I'm very willing to visit other cities that have different climates from where I lived.

✓ Personally, I'm very willing to visit other cities that have different climates from where I live.

“lived”为过去式，句意应为现在时态，故改为“live”。

× For example, the city where I live. Never snow in winter, Therefore I'm very curious about what the snowscape look like.

✓ For example, the city where I live never snows in winter. Therefore, I'm very curious about what the snowscape looks like.

“city”是单数，谓语动词应为“snows”；“snowscape”后谓语动词应为“looks”，与主语一致。

× So I had planned to. Travel to London for a long time.

✓ So I have planned to travel to London for a long time.

句子断开不连贯，应合并为一句，且时态应为现在完成时“have planned”。