Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且有重复词汇。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。

例: The weather in Rome is usually very pleasant and sunny. I often need to wear sunglasses because of the bright sunshine.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但句子连接不够流畅，部分语法错误影响理解。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并注意语法准确。

例: I prefer cold weather because in hot summers, I often get sweaty and have to change clothes frequently. Also, I tend to lose my appetite, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

提案: 回答中有较多语法和表达错误，内容不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用准确词汇，并注意逻辑连贯。

例: I prefer dry weather because during wet days, the humidity is very high. It makes it hard for clothes to dry and the dampness can make people feel uncomfortable.

提案: 回答较为完整且自然，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every day so that I can decide what to wear and whether to bring an umbrella.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误严重，词汇使用不当。建议先理清思路，使用简单句表达观点，并注意词汇准确性。

例: I think climate change has caused hotter summers and colder winters. These extreme weather events lead to floods and droughts, which reduce food production and affect agriculture.

提案: 回答内容不明确，语法和词汇错误严重，难以理解。建议使用简单句表达愿望，明确目的地和原因。

例: Yes, I would like to visit northern Europe to experience a different climate and learn more about the world.

× The weather in Rome it quite good.

✓ The weather in Rome is quite good.

句子中多余使用了主语"it"，导致结构混乱。正确句子应为"The weather in Rome is quite good."，即主语+系动词+表语的结构。

× Big, big sunshine, so.

✓ There is big, big sunshine.

句子中"so"的使用不当，且缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。应使用"There is"引出天气状况。

× I prefer cold days be cause in hot days like summer.

✓ I prefer cold days because I don't like hot days like summer.

句子中"be cause"拼写错误，应为"because"。此外，句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× It is really easy to get sweaty, so you need to change your clothes are often besides.

✓ It is really easy to get sweaty, so you need to change your clothes often besides.

句中"are"使用错误，"change your clothes are often"应为"change your clothes often"。此外，"besides"位置不当，放在句尾更合适。

× I'm very likely to lose appetite during these hot days. Which makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I'm very likely to lose appetite during these hot days, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

"Which makes me feel uncomfortable."是一个非限制性定语从句，不能单独成句，应与前句用逗号连接。

× I prefer dry weather because they're in the wet days.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I don't like wet days.

句中"they're"指代不明且用法错误，应使用第一人称"I"表达个人喜好。

× The humidity if Kara hide here so close.

✓ The humidity here is so high and close.

句中"if Kara hide"无意义，疑为拼写错误，应为"is so high and close"，形容湿度大且闷热。

× So it is hard for the washed clothes to dry and their water is everywhere on the wars on the roof and.

✓ So it is hard for the washed clothes to dry and there is water everywhere on the walls and the roof.

句中"their water"应为"there is water"，"wars"应为"walls"，且句子结构不完整，需补充。

× It just makes people feel hard to breathe.

✓ It just makes people feel it is hard to breathe.

句子缺少主语补足，"feel hard to breathe"不完整，应补充"it is"使句子完整。

× Yes, I almost check the weather forecast every day.

✓ Yes, I almost always check the weather forecast every day.

"almost"位置不当，应放在"always"前形成"almost always"表示频率。

× So I will decide what I will wear and whether I will bring an umbrella based on the weather forecast.

✓ So I decide what to wear and whether to bring an umbrella based on the weather forecast.

描述习惯动作时应使用一般现在时，而非将来时。

× I think the climate change in recent years make the summer harder and make the wind colder and.

✓ I think the climate change in recent years makes the summer hotter and makes the wind colder.

主语"climate change"为单数，谓语动词应加-s，且"harder"用词不当，应为"hotter"。

× These extreme weathers leads to float.

✓ These extreme weathers lead to floods.

"weathers"通常不可数，复数形式不常用，且"leads"应与复数主语一致用"lead"，"float"应为"floods"。

× And drugs which causes the decline of the.

✓ And droughts which cause the decline of the food production.

"drugs"应为"droughts"（干旱），谓语动词应与复数主语一致用"cause"。

× Food production and affect the AG.

✓ Food production and agriculture are affected.

句子不完整，缺少谓语，"affect"应改为被动语态"are affected"，"AG"应为"agriculture"。

× Yes, I want to travel to the nothing part of the euro to explain to experience the world, false nose and August.

✓ Yes, I want to travel to the northern part of Europe to explore and experience the world, for example in August.

句子中"nothing part of the euro"应为"northern part of Europe"，"explain"用词错误，应为"explore"，句子结构混乱需调整。