Weather— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời ngắn gọn hơn. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng về thời tiết quanh năm và tránh lỗi phát âm từ 'Ann' (có thể là 'and') và 'on around'.

例: I live in Ho Chi Minh City, which is in the southern part of Vietnam. The weather is hot throughout the year.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Bạn nên nói trực tiếp về sở thích thời tiết và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer a balance between cold and hot weather because I feel more energized in cool weather. I don't really like extreme heat.

提案: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Bạn có thể thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ hơn.

例: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes transportation difficult and daily activities harder. For example, heavy rain can cause traffic jams.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Bạn nên nói rõ thói quen kiểm tra dự báo thời tiết và lý do cụ thể.

例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning to decide what clothes to wear and whether I need to bring an umbrella.

提案: Câu trả lời cần mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Bạn nên cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu rõ ràng hơn.

例: Climate change has made the weather unpredictable. For example, some places experience hotter weather and longer seasons than before.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói trực tiếp về sở thích và lý do muốn đến những nơi có khí hậu khác biệt.

例: Of course, I would like to visit cold places where people can enjoy winter sports. It would be very interesting and different from my hometown.

× I am based in Ho Chi Minh City. Ann is part of the certain part in Vietnam, so the weather is hot on around the year.

✓ I am based in Ho Chi Minh City. It is part of a certain region in Vietnam, so the weather is hot throughout the year.

The phrase 'Ann is part of the certain part in Vietnam' is incorrect. 'Ann' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'It'. Also, 'the certain part' should be 'a certain region' or 'a certain part'. The preposition 'on around the year' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'throughout the year' to indicate the entire duration.

× Uhm. I prefer a balance of codes and hot weather which is cool weather I I feel more. Energized an, UM, convertible under cool weather. Ann I don't really like.

✓ Uhm. I prefer a balance of cold and hot weather, which is cool weather. I feel more energized and comfortable under cool weather. And I don't really like hot weather.

The sentence contains several errors: 'codes' should be 'cold'; 'convertible' is incorrect and should be 'comfortable'; 'Ann' is likely a mishearing of 'and'. The sentence structure is fragmented and unclear. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Dry weather works better for me. Uhm. I Wet weather makes transportation very difficult and other daily activities even more hard to do. Generally speaking, I prefer dry weather.

✓ Dry weather works better for me. Uhm. Wet weather makes transportation very difficult and other daily activities even harder to do. Generally speaking, I prefer dry weather.

The phrase 'I Wet weather' is incorrect; 'I' should be removed. Also, 'more hard' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'harder'. These corrections fix prepositional and adjective usage errors.

× Yes, I'm. I checked. NUM weather in the morning everyday to make sure that I bring enough clothes an to know if I need to bring umbrella or any anything else.

✓ Yes, I do. I check the weather in the morning every day to make sure that I bring enough clothes and to know if I need to bring an umbrella or anything else.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'checked' when present tense 'check' is appropriate for habitual action. 'NUM' seems to be a placeholder and is removed. 'everyday' should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase). 'an' should be 'and'. 'bring umbrella' needs an article: 'bring an umbrella'.

× Climate change in general has made the. Weather unpredictable For example, I have heard from the news that some in some places the hot weather gets harder and some seasons may last longer then.

✓ Climate change in general has made the weather unpredictable. For example, I have heard from the news that in some places the hot weather becomes more intense and some seasons may last longer than before.

The original sentence has a misplaced period and fragmented structure. 'gets harder' is unclear; 'becomes more intense' is better. 'then' should be 'than before' for comparison. These corrections improve sentence flow and clarity.

× Of course I would like to visit like physically cold places where people can participate in UM. I winter sports. I find it very interesting and very different from where I live.

✓ Of course, I would like to visit physically cold places where people can participate in winter sports. I find it very interesting and very different from where I live.

The phrase 'like physically cold places' is incorrect; 'like' should be removed. 'UM. I winter sports' is fragmented and unclear; it should be 'in winter sports'. These corrections fix prepositional and sentence structure errors.