Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、简洁并直接回应问题。避免语法错误和重复，使用一到两句说明频率和原因，然后用1-2句具体细节支持。注意时态和冠词，去掉不必要的词如“daring”。

例: Yes, I write a lot every day because it helps me stay organized and reduces stress. For example, I make a to-do list each morning and jot down thoughts before bed, which helps me clear my mind.

提案: 开头应直接回答问题（写什么），然后解释原因并给具体例子。注意语序和名词形式（my life），避免冗长重复。使用连接词如“because”或“so”让逻辑更清楚。

例: I mainly write daily plans and short personal notes because they keep my life organized. For instance, I list tasks for the day and write brief reminders, so I feel more confident when I complete them.

提案: 答案偏离主题且含糊（不知“Somerest”是否正确）。先直接回答“yes/no”并解释为什么会改变，给具体情境作为例子。减少犹豫语（uh）并用完整句子。

例: Yes, I think what I write will change because my priorities and experiences change over time. For example, during exams I write study schedules, but later I write work-related plans or travel notes.

提案: 回答明确且有理由，但句子不完整并有语法错误（save → saves）。可补充一两个具体场景比较两者的优缺点，保持在最多五句内。

例: I prefer typing because it's more convenient and saves time. For example, I can edit quickly and search my notes, while handwriting is better only when I want to slow down and remember things.

提案: 表达较好但需改进语法（keep a diary; writing helps; remind/remember重复）。回答时可给具体习惯或时间段以增加信息量。

例: I keep a diary every day because writing helps me organize my thoughts and remember important tasks. Usually I write for ten minutes before bed to review my day and plan tomorrow.

提案: 内容清晰且具体，但语法和表达需改进（apps like WeChat; not only write words but also add photos）。可稍微扩展为何喜欢这种方式以及例子。

例: I often use apps like WeChat to record my life because I can write short notes and add photos or videos. For example, I post a photo with a caption after a trip so friends can see and comment.

× Yes, I write a lot every day because I like writing, daring because it's which is make my life more organized and feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I write a lot every day because I like writing — it makes my life more organized and helps me feel relaxed.

原句中多处动词/结构使用错误："daring" 与语境不符，"which is make" 应为动词短语，且主语不明。需要用动名词或简单现在时的动词来表达习惯性事实。建议使用："it makes..."和"helps me..."来表达"使得"和"让我"的含义。注意连词与从句的使用，保持句子简洁。

× Yes, I like to write because writing will make me life organized. I can do anything well because I have prepared by writing which make me feel confident.

✓ Yes, I like to write because writing makes my life organized. I can do things well because I prepare by writing, which makes me feel confident.

原句时态和主谓一致有问题："will make me life organized" 中不应使用 will 表示习惯性事实，应使用一般现在时并且应为 "make my life organized"。第二句中应使用一般现在时 "prepare" 表示经常性的动作，"which make" 主语为单数"which"指代前句，动词应为 "makes"。建议多用一般现在时表达习惯或常态，并注意主谓一致。

× I think Somerset will be changing, uh, because uh, uh, life is always change. And for example, uh, something will be, uh, happened suddenly and I don't uh, prepare it.

✓ I think some things will change, because life is always changing. For example, something may happen suddenly and I don't prepare for it.

原句中有词汇和时态错误："Somerset" 很可能为错误听写，应为 "some things"；"life is always change" 应为现在进行式或现在分词结构 "life is always changing"。"will be changing" 可保留但更自然为 "will change"；"will be, happened" 混用被动和过去分词不当，改为情态动词+动词原形或过去分词。此外，常用搭配为 "prepare for something"。建议理清主语并使用正确的时态和固定搭配。

× I prefer typing because it's very convenient and save me time. It's.

✓ I prefer typing because it's very convenient and saves me time.

原句中缺少主谓一致："save me time" 在这里主语是 "it"（指 typing），应为第三人称单数动词 "saves"。另外句末多余的 "It's." 应删除。建议注意主句主语，确保动词形式与主语一致。

× I keep diary every day because writing help me organize my thoughts and remind remember important things.

✓ I keep a diary every day because writing helps me organize my thoughts and reminds me of important things.

原句中缺失不定冠词 "a"（keep a diary）。此外 "writing help" 主谓不一致，应为 "writing helps"。动词短语 "remind remember" 错误重复，正确搭配为 "remind me of" 或 "help me remember"。建议学习常见动词搭配并注意冠词和主谓一致。

× I often use app like WeChat to record my life. It's not only write some word and also put photos and short videos to capture special moments and share them with friends.

✓ I often use apps like WeChat to record my life. It's not only for writing some words but also for putting photos and short videos to capture special moments and share them with friends.

原句中名词复数和冠词使用错误："app" 在此处应为复数或加冠词，改为 "apps like WeChat" 更自然。句子结构 "It's not only write... and also put..." 非法，应使用介词短语或动名词，如 "not only for writing... but also for putting..." 或更简洁地说 "It not only lets me write words, but also lets me add photos..."。建议调整句子结构，使用平行结构和正确的介词短语。