Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多いです。意味が伝わりにくく、内容も不明瞭です。より明確で簡潔な文を使い、質問に直接答えることを意識しましょう。

例: No, I don't write a lot. I usually type on my laptop because I find it faster and more convenient than writing by hand.

提案: 文が途中で終わっており、内容が不完全です。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させることが必要です。また、繰り返しを避け、自然な表現を心がけましょう。

例: I prefer typing on the keyboard rather than writing by hand because it is more convenient and faster for me.

提案: 質問の意図を理解していないようです。内容が質問に直接答えておらず、理由も不明瞭です。質問の意味を理解し、具体的な理由や意見を述べる練習をしましょう。

例: I don't think the content of what I write will change much because I usually write about my daily experiences and thoughts.

提案: 話が途切れ途切れで不自然です。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させることが大切です。接続詞を使って論理的に話をつなげましょう。

例: I prefer typing on the keyboard because it is faster and more convenient. Additionally, it helps me edit my work easily.

提案: 内容は比較的明確ですが、単語の誤り（dairies→diaries）や表現の自然さを改善しましょう。より豊かな語彙を使い、理由を詳しく述べると良いです。

例: I never keep diaries because I prefer taking pictures of my daily life. It's quicker and helps me remember moments better when I look at the photos later.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。正しい表現を使い、具体的な説明を加えて答えを明確にしましょう。

例: I like to buy souvenirs when I visit tourist spots as a way to remember my experiences.

× I usually type keyboard on my laptop instead of writing on paper.

✓ I usually type on the keyboard on my laptop instead of writing on paper.

The verb 'type' requires the preposition 'on' before 'keyboard' to be grammatically correct. The phrase 'type keyboard' is incorrect because 'keyboard' is a noun and needs a preposition to show the action's target.

× That is because many tasks.

✓ That is because I have many tasks.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. Adding 'I have' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I used to buy pasta.

✓ I used to buy pasta.

This sentence is grammatically correct but contextually unclear. No correction needed for grammar.

× I choose type on the keyboard rather than writing on paper.

✓ I choose to type on the keyboard rather than write on paper.

The verb 'choose' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to type' rather than just 'type'. Also, parallel structure requires 'write' instead of 'writing' after 'rather than'.

× It's convenient and.

✓ It's convenient.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Removing the conjunction 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× I don't think the things I write would change because writing by hand is very convenient.

✓ I don't think the things I write will change because writing by hand is very convenient.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used here; 'will' is appropriate to express future certainty in this context.

× It's just only paper and some pen.

✓ It's just paper and a pen.

The phrase 'just only' is redundant; 'just' alone suffices. Also, 'some pen' is incorrect; 'a pen' is the correct singular form.

× I often choose typing on the keyboard rather than writing by hand because it's more convenient and faster.

✓ I often choose typing on the keyboard rather than writing by hand because it's more convenient and faster.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× In addition, writing. Uh, no, no. Typing on the keyboard offers many help things.

✓ In addition, typing on the keyboard offers many helpful features.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Writing. Uh, no, no.' is incomplete and should be removed. 'Help things' is incorrect; 'helpful features' is a better phrase.

× I never keep dairies because I usually take some pictures in daily life instead.

✓ I never keep diaries because I usually take some pictures in daily life instead.

The word 'dairies' is misspelled; the correct plural form is 'diaries'.

× I can remember that by seeing the picture.

✓ I can remember that by looking at the picture.

The verb 'see' is not typically used with 'by' in this context. 'Looking at' is the correct phrase to express the action of observing a picture.

× I think that buying souvenir in sightseeing sport is the method to record my memory.

✓ I think that buying souvenirs in sightseeing spots is the method to record my memories.

'Souvenir' should be plural 'souvenirs' to match the context. 'Sightseeing sport' is incorrect; it should be 'sightseeing spots'. Also, 'memory' should be plural 'memories' to refer to multiple recollections.