Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够完整且有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议回答时完整表达意思，并注意语法和句子结构，使回答更流畅自然。

例: I used to write a lot when I was a student, but now I prefer typing on a computer because it's faster and more convenient.

提案: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，缺少具体细节。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并举具体例子说明喜欢写的内容。

例: I like to write different things such as my to-do lists, diary entries, and notes because they help me stay organized and remember important events.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并用连贯的句子说明原因。

例: No, I don't think what I write will change because writing things down helps me keep a permanent record that lasts a long time.

提案: 回答较好，但可以更自然流畅。建议使用更多连接词，使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。

例: Honestly, I prefer typing because it's easier to edit and print out, and I can store the documents safely to refer back to them whenever I need.

提案: 回答中有语法错误且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，清晰表达频率和原因。

例: I write a diary for my son so that when he grows up, we can look back at it together, but I don't do it regularly.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构不够自然。建议调整句子顺序，使用连接词，使表达更流畅。

例: On Mondays, I write my to-do list by hand because my work is very busy and I have to multitask, so this helps me stay organized.

× When I was a student I wrote about, but currently I prefer to use computer to type what I want to express.

✓ When I was a student, I wrote a lot, but currently I prefer to use a computer to type what I want to express.

句中缺少了表示数量的词语“a lot”，并且“computer”前缺少冠词“a”，这两个错误属于过去时态和冠词使用问题。建议在表达过去频率时使用具体数量词，并注意单数可数名词前需要冠词。

× There are loads of kinds that I would like to write so example.

✓ There are loads of kinds that I would like to write, for example.

句中“so example”用法错误，正确表达应为“for example”，表示举例。建议学习常用短语的正确搭配。

× My tasks list or diary or any notes?

✓ My task list, diary, or any notes.

句子结构不完整，且“tasks list”应为“task list”，并且使用逗号分隔列举项。建议注意句子完整性和名词单复数形式。

× No, I don't think so. I the reason for why I prefer to write something down is it would wouldn't change and it will be it will last a long time.

✓ No, I don't think so. The reason why I prefer to write something down is that it wouldn't change and it will last a long time.

句中“ I the reason for why”结构错误，缺少谓语动词，且“would wouldn't”重复。建议注意句子主谓结构完整和避免重复。

× Honestly, I prefer typing words down and print it out because it can be preserved well and I can refer back to it anytime.

✓ Honestly, I prefer typing words down and printing them out because they can be preserved well and I can refer back to them anytime.

“print it out”应与前面的“typing words down”保持一致，使用动名词形式“printing”，且代词应与复数“words”一致用“them”。建议注意动词形式和代词一致性。

× I am writing a diary for my son for the reason when he grow up we can refer back to it, but it's not a regularly thing.

✓ I am writing a diary for my son because when he grows up we can refer back to it, but it's not a regular thing.

“regularly”是副词，修饰名词应使用形容词“regular”；“grow”应为第三人称单数“grows”。建议注意副词和形容词的用法及主谓一致。

× Monday I write To Do List by hand because my work is very busy and I should do multi tasks at the same time so this can help me stay organized.

✓ On Monday, I write my To-Do List by hand because my work is very busy and I have to do multiple tasks at the same time, so this can help me stay organized.

“Monday”前应加介词“On”；“multi tasks”应为“multiple tasks”；“should do”表达义务不准确，改为“have to do”。建议注意介词使用和词汇搭配。