Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ ngữ và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I write quite often, usually every day, because I need to practice. I also take notes during my lessons at school.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và tránh lặp từ như "Remember Remember". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ.

例: I like to write reminders and plans for my upcoming week because when I write them down, I can remember my tasks more efficiently and avoid forgetting important things. This helps me stay organized and manage my time better.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I think the things I write will change in the future. Currently, I mostly write daily emails or social media posts, but as I gain more experience, I expect to write more formal documents like detailed reports.

提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như "referred time" hay "time mix" và chú ý ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh từ ngữ không phù hợp.

例: Honestly, I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and more convenient. My handwriting is quite messy, so using a keyboard helps me produce clear and more professional-looking documents.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và câu bị ngắt quãng. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: To be honest, I rarely use a traditional paper diary these days. When I was younger, I used to keep one regularly, but now I prefer making quick digital notes on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, từ không chính xác như "knotted uh tagging app" hay "say idea". Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn.

例: Besides writing, I often use my smartphone to record my life. I take lots of photos and videos to capture important moments with my family and friends. Also, I use a note-taking app to quickly save ideas, conversations, and meeting summaries, which is much more efficient than writing on paper.

× I have writing and I I write my lessons in school.

✓ I have writing assignments and I write my lessons in school.

The word 'writing' is a non-count noun here, but the context suggests 'writing assignments' which is countable and plural. Adding 'assignments' clarifies the meaning and corrects the singular/plural issue.

× Hi TV orders.

✓ I write orders.

'Hi TV orders' is unclear and seems to be a mispronunciation or typo. The correct pronoun is 'I' and the verb should be 'write' to match the context.

× This help me stay organized and manage by time better.

✓ This helps me stay organized and manage my time better.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular). Also, 'by time' is incorrect; it should be 'my time' to indicate possession.

× I suspect to write more formal documents to track detailed reports when I enjoy creating.

✓ I expect to write more formal documents to track detailed reports as I gain more experience.

The verb 'suspect' is incorrectly used with 'to write'. The correct modal verb here is 'expect'. Also, the phrase 'when I enjoy creating' is unclear and replaced with 'as I gain more experience' for clarity.

× My handwriting is quite messy, so using a keyboard have me produce clear and more professional looking documents.

✓ My handwriting is quite messy, so using a keyboard helps me produce clear and more professional looking documents.

The subject 'using a keyboard' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular) instead of 'have'.

× Additionally, time mix is easy to date.

✓ Additionally, time management is easy to do.

'time mix' and 'easy to date' are incorrect phrases. The intended meaning is likely 'time management is easy to do' or 'manage'.

× but now I'm I prefer making quick digital notes on my phone, but because it's more convenient and accessible.

✓ but now I prefer making quick digital notes on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.

The phrase 'I'm I prefer' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'I prefer'. Also, the conjunction 'but' before 'because' is unnecessary.

× Beside writing, I often use my my smartphone to recall my lie.

✓ Besides writing, I often use my smartphone to recall my life.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' to mean 'in addition to'. Also, 'my lie' is a typo and should be 'my life'.

× I will take a lot take lots of photo and video to capture important moments with my family and friends.

✓ I will take lots of photos and videos to capture important moments with my family and friends.

'photo' and 'video' should be plural 'photos' and 'videos' to match 'lots of'. Also, 'a lot take' is redundant and incorrect.

× Also, I use a specific knotted uh tagging app to quickly say idea, conversation and meeting summary, which is much more efficient than career.

✓ Also, I use a specific note-taking app to quickly save ideas, conversations, and meeting summaries, which is much more efficient than paper.

'knotted uh tagging app' is a mishearing or typo for 'note-taking app'. 'say idea' should be 'save ideas'. 'career' is incorrect and likely meant to be 'paper'.