Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa chotto fukuzatsu de, 'write a lot' no imi ga sukoshi fumei desu. 'It makes his happy' wa grammatikaru ni machigatte imasu. Motto shizen de seikaku na hyougen o tsukatte kudasai.

例: Yes, I write quite often, especially letters to my boyfriend. Writing letters makes him happy and helps us stay connected.

提案: Kotae ga fumei de, 'I like to like my love' wa imi ga wakarimasen. 'umm' wa yoku tsukaimasu ga, IELTS de wa yokeru hou ga ii desu. Motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

例: I like to write love letters to my boyfriend because chatting online is not enough. Writing helps me express my feelings more deeply.

提案: Kotae ga fumei de, 'the thing I liked' ya 'luxury I loved' no imi ga wakarimasen. Motto meikaku ni setsumei shite, rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

例: No, I don't think what I write will change because my feelings for my boyfriend are constant and special to me.

提案: Kotae wa meikaku de, rikai shi yasui desu. Demo, 'so convenient and effective' wa chotto kantan sugiru node, motto kuwashiku setsumei shite kudasai.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and more convenient, especially when I need to write quickly or edit my text.

提案: Kotae wa sukoshi fumei de, 'I'm me' no imi ga wakarimasen. 'It helpful' wa grammatikaru ni machigatte imasu. Motto seikaku na hyougen o tsukatte kudasai.

例: I keep a diary every day. Writing daily helps me remember important events and is useful for my future.

提案: 'I light my life in English' wa imi ga fumei desu. Kotae wa chotto fumei de, motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

例: I use Instagram stories to record my life. I write captions in English and share them with my friends.

× It makes his happy.

✓ It makes him happy.

The pronoun 'his' is a possessive adjective and cannot be used as the object of the verb 'makes'. The correct object pronoun here is 'him'. Use 'him' when the pronoun is the object of a verb.

× I like to like my love for my boyfriend because umm.

✓ I like to express my love for my boyfriend because umm.

The phrase 'I like to like my love' is incorrect and unclear. The verb 'like' should not be repeated. Instead, use 'express' to convey the intended meaning of showing or communicating love.

× No, I don't think the thing I liked would change because this is the luxury I loved.

✓ No, I don't think the thing I like would change because this is the love I have.

The use of past tense 'liked' and 'loved' is inconsistent with the present context. Also, 'luxury' is incorrect here; likely intended word is 'love'. Use present tense 'like' and 'have' to express ongoing feelings.

× I keep Diaries every day.

✓ I keep a diary every day.

The noun 'diaries' is plural, but the sentence refers to a singular habit. Use singular 'diary' with the article 'a' to indicate one diary kept daily.

× If I write daily every day, I'm me.

✓ If I write daily every day, I can remember myself.

The phrase 'I'm me' is unclear and ungrammatical. The intended meaning seems to be about remembering or understanding oneself, so rephrasing is necessary for clarity.

× It helpful for me in the future.

✓ It is helpful for me in the future.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and adjective. 'Helpful' is an adjective and requires a linking verb to form a correct sentence.

× I light my life in English and I share with my friend.

✓ I write about my life in English and share it with my friends.

The verb 'light' is incorrect here; likely intended verb is 'write'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match general sharing. Additionally, 'share it' clarifies the object shared.