Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够流畅，有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I write quite a lot, mainly professional documents such as business plans, academic essays, and sometimes CVs.

提案: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，缺乏具体细节和逻辑连接。建议明确表达喜欢写什么，并说明原因，使用连词使句子连贯。

例: I enjoy writing short academic essays, especially about finance, because I find the topic interesting and it helps me improve my knowledge.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用不当，逻辑混乱。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，并举例说明变化的可能性。

例: Yes, I believe what I write will change over time. For example, in five years, new techniques and skills may emerge, so my writing topics and opinions will evolve accordingly.

提案: 回答较为流畅，但有些重复和口语化表达。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更正式的表达。

例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient. Using a keyboard allows me to write a lot in a short time, which feels comfortable and convenient.

× Probably it is like the final, the some, some business plan or other kind of small academic essays and maybe some like CV.

✓ Probably it is like the final, some business plans or other kinds of small academic essays and maybe some CVs.

这里'some'后面名词的单复数形式使用错误。'business plan'和'kind'应使用复数形式'business plans'和'kinds'，'CV'也应为复数形式'CVs'。英文中，'some'后面接可数名词时，名词应为复数。

× You see, they just like some people, yeah, in the on the Internet about finance and also I probably gain some.

✓ You see, they are just like some people on the Internet who talk about finance and also I probably gain some.

原句中'in the on the Internet'是错误的介词搭配，应为'on the Internet'。此外，句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，需补充。

× Yeah. So you write something for example, like you write some opinions about else task, some techniques, some skills, but but in the future maybe sleep for five years later things will change a lot.

✓ Yeah. So you write something, for example, like you write some opinions about other tasks, some techniques, some skills, but in the future, maybe after five years, things will change a lot.

'about else task'中'else'用法错误，应为'other'，且'task'应为复数'tasks'。'sleep for five years later'表达不正确，应改为'after five years'。

× Nowadays I think typing is a very fast way for us to to write things because just by typing the keyboard you can write a lot of stuff in very in a very short time and it makes you like feel very comfortable and it is efficient.

✓ Nowadays I think typing is a very fast way for us to write things because just by typing on the keyboard you can write a lot of stuff in a very short time and it makes you feel very comfortable and it is efficient.

'typing the keyboard'中缺少介词'on'，正确表达应为'typing on the keyboard'。此外，句中多余的重复词'to to'应删除。