Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为简单且有重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且注意句子完整性。

例: Yes, I write quite a lot because my major is Chinese language and literature, which requires extensive reading and writing. Besides academic work, I enjoy writing as a way to relax and express myself.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，表达有些重复。建议丰富细节，使用更地道的表达，并且注意语法准确性。

例: I enjoy writing diaries because it's an easy and personal way to document my daily experiences and reflect on my thoughts, which helps me relax and understand myself better.

提案: 回答较完整，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I believe my writing will change over time because as I gain more life experience, my perspectives and writing skills will evolve accordingly.

提案: 表达不够自然，句子结构重复且用词不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，明确说明原因，并避免重复。

例: I prefer handwriting because it's more convenient for me and helps me focus better, reducing mistakes and improving my language accuracy.

× Things I write a lot because my major is Chinese language and literature.

✓ I write a lot because my major is Chinese language and literature.

原句缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充主语“I”，使句子完整通顺。

× It requires me to read a lot and do some writings.

✓ It requires me to read a lot and do some writing.

“writings”通常指多篇作品，作为不可数名词时应使用“writing”，表示写作活动。此处应使用不可数名词形式。

× Also, I love writings because I think it's a great way for me to relax.

✓ Also, I love writing because I think it's a great way for me to relax.

同上，表示写作活动时应使用不可数名词“writing”，而非复数形式“writings”。

× I would love to write some Diaries in my life because I think keeping Diaries is very easy for me and it's a great way to record my special life and relax myself.

✓ I would love to write some diaries in my life because I think keeping diaries is very easy for me and it's a great way to record my special life and relax myself.

“diary”作为普通名词，复数形式应小写，且不需要大写首字母。

× my writing skills and ideas tends to change as well.

✓ my writing skills and ideas tend to change as well.

主语“skills and ideas”为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“tend”，而非单数“tends”。

× it can help me to avoid some unnecessary mistake and some linguistic problems.

✓ it can help me to avoid some unnecessary mistakes and some linguistic problems.

“mistake”应使用复数形式“mistakes”，因为前面有不定量词“some”，表示多个错误。