Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
Actually, I don't write that much nowadays. I mostly use the computer for reading or doing some research, so I hardly have time to write.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
Let me think. I enjoy writing stories, especially cartoons, because I find them exciting and full of imagination.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
Yes, I do. I think the things I write will change as I grow older and as my life and other things change.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
Actually, I prefer the handwriting during my high school years because I didn't have a computer at that time. But nowadays I use a computer most of the time, so I prefer typing.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为简洁，但缺少直接回应问题的主题句，且内容稍显重复。建议开头直接回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，避免冗余。
例: No, I don't write a lot these days because I spend most of my time reading or researching on the computer, which leaves me little time for writing.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答较好，表达了喜好和原因，但开头的“Let me think”显得不够自然。建议直接回答问题，并用连接词丰富内容。
例: I enjoy writing stories, especially cartoons, because they are exciting and full of imagination, which allows me to express my creativity.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答直接，但内容较为简单，缺少具体细节。建议增加具体原因或例子，使回答更丰富。
例: Yes, I believe my writing will change as I grow older because my experiences and interests will evolve, influencing the topics and style I choose.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 90.0提案: 回答清晰且有逻辑，表达了时间变化带来的偏好变化。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
例: I used to prefer handwriting during my high school years since I didn't have a computer then; however, now I mostly use a computer, so I prefer typing for convenience and speed.
文法
× What do you like to write? Why?
✓ What do you like to write? Why?
该句无语法错误，符合第三人称单数的使用规则。
× Actually, I prefer the handwriting during my high school years because I didn't have a computer at that time.
✓ Actually, I preferred handwriting during my high school years because I didn't have a computer at that time.
这里使用了不正确的定冠词“the handwriting”，应去掉“the”变为“handwriting”，因为handwriting作为不可数名词不需要冠词。同时，时态应与过去时间状语“during my high school years”一致，使用过去时“preferred”。
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