Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
Yes, I write quite a lot because I'm majoring in Chinese in my university and I should always to write some essays and also I would write some Diaries in my daily life, so I write quite a lot.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
I really enjoy to write some Diaries because I want to record some meaningful times all my life. For example, I will write my graduation ceremony and also my birthday experience on my diary book.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
Well, I think yes. Now I'm a student in my university, so I write something about my study or my essays and my homework. But in the future, when I go to work, I will write something about my colleagues and my work and also maybe the families. So it will change a lot.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
Definitely handwriting because I think from handwriting you can feel the emotions of that time. For example, in the future when you open your diary book, when you see a meaningful things you record in your books and that will bring you back to that times. So that's more meaningful than.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 75.0提案: 你的回答表达了写作的频率和原因，但句子结构有些重复且不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复使用“write quite a lot”，并注意语法，如“should always to write”应为“should always write”。
例: Yes, I write quite a lot because I am majoring in Chinese at university, so I often have to write essays. Besides that, I also keep a diary in my daily life.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中表达了喜欢写日记的原因，但语法和用词不够准确，如“enjoy to write”应为“enjoy writing”，“some Diaries”应为“diaries”。建议使用更自然的表达，并丰富细节。
例: I really enjoy writing diaries because I want to record meaningful moments in my life. For example, I write about my graduation ceremony and birthday experiences in my diary.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容清晰，表达了观点和原因，但句子稍显简单，连接词使用不足。建议使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，并丰富细节。
例: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time. Currently, as a university student, I write about my studies and assignments. However, in the future, when I start working, I expect to write more about my colleagues, work experiences, and family life.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答表达了偏好和原因，但句子结构不够流畅，存在语法错误，如“a meaningful things”应为“meaningful things”，且结尾不完整。建议改进句子结构，使用更准确的表达。
例: I definitely prefer handwriting because it captures the emotions of the moment. For example, when you open your diary in the future and read the meaningful things you wrote, it can bring back those memories vividly, which feels more special than typing.
文法
× I should always to write some essays and also I would write some Diaries in my daily life, so I write quite a lot.
✓ I should always write some essays and also I would write some diaries in my daily life, so I write quite a lot.
在情态动词should后面，动词应使用原形，不能加to。这里的错误是多余使用了to。
× I really enjoy to write some Diaries because I want to record some meaningful times all my life.
✓ I really enjoy writing some diaries because I want to record some meaningful times all my life.
动词enjoy后应接动名词形式（-ing），而不是不定式to write。
× For example, I will write my graduation ceremony and also my birthday experience on my diary book.
✓ For example, I will write about my graduation ceremony and also my birthday experience in my diary.
diary是可数名词，通常用单数形式；另外，表达“写在日记里”应使用介词in而非on。
× when you see a meaningful things you record in your books and that will bring you back to that times.
✓ when you see meaningful things you recorded in your book and that will bring you back to those times.
things和times是复数，前面不应加a；books应为单数book；时态应与上下文一致，使用过去式recorded；that times应改为those times。
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