Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
Well, I used to write a lot because my teacher always assigned me some writing tasks such as essays and articles. But nowadays I really write because I had to concentrate on more other subjects.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
Well, I don't really enjoy writing because it takes me a lot of time and effort. For instance, I often struggle to organize ideas, which makes the progress quite frustrating.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
Yes, definitely. When I was a child I often wrote about animals twice and other things related to my daily life. But now I prefer to write some beautiful stories 'cause I enjoy using my imagination.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
Well, I prefer typing when I write because it is much more convenient and efficient than handwriting. What's more is the handwriting paper are always easy, easier to to be lost and get damaged.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“nowadays I really write”应为“nowadays I don't write much”。建议注意时态和否定表达的准确使用，同时避免冗余表达。
例: I used to write a lot because my teacher assigned many essays and articles. However, nowadays I don't write much as I need to focus on other subjects.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答表达了观点和原因，但缺少连接词使句子衔接不够流畅。建议使用连接词如“because”、“so”来增强逻辑性，同时丰富词汇表达。
例: I don't really enjoy writing because it takes a lot of time and effort. For example, I often struggle to organize my ideas, so the process can be quite frustrating.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答内容具体且有对比，但“animals twice”表达不清晰，建议用更准确的词汇和句式，同时使用连接词使表达更自然。
例: Yes, definitely. When I was a child, I often wrote about animals and other daily life topics. However, now I prefer writing imaginative stories because I enjoy using my creativity.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“handwriting paper are always easy, easier to to be lost”不通顺。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复词汇，并用更准确的表达。
例: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and efficient than handwriting. Moreover, handwritten papers are easy to lose or get damaged.
文法
× But nowadays I really write because I had to concentrate on more other subjects.
✓ But nowadays I really don't write because I have to concentrate on more other subjects.
句子中时态使用不当。'had to'是过去时，但句子描述的是现在的情况，应使用现在时'have to'。此外，'really write'缺少否定，表达意思应为'我现在真的不写了'。
× I had to concentrate on more other subjects.
✓ I have to concentrate on more subjects.
'more other'是冗余表达，应去掉其中一个，通常用'more'或'other'，这里用'more'即可。
× When I was a child I often wrote about animals twice and other things related to my daily life.
✓ When I was a child I often wrote about animals and other things related to my daily life twice.
'twice'的位置不当，放在'animals'后面使句意不清，应放在句尾修饰整个动作。
× But now I prefer to write some beautiful stories 'cause I enjoy using my imagination.
✓ But now I prefer to write some beautiful stories because I enjoy using my imagination.
'cause'是口语缩写形式，正式书面语应使用'because'。
× What's more is the handwriting paper are always easy, easier to to be lost and get damaged.
✓ What's more is that handwriting papers are always easy, easier to be lost and get damaged.
'handwriting paper'应为复数形式'handwriting papers'，且句子缺少连接词'is that'，'to to'重复，应删除一个'to'。
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