Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够直接，句子结构不够自然，表达有些混乱。建议直接回答问题，并用简洁自然的句子表达。

例: Yes, I write quite often, especially when I keep a diary at least once a week because I enjoy spending time writing.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议避免重复，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明写作的原因。

例: I like to write a diary because it helps me reflect on my life experiences and express my personal emotions in a private space.

提案: 表达有些冗长且语法不准确。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I think the way I write has changed due to technology. I used to write in a notebook, but now I type on apps.

提案: 句子结构不完整，重复使用“type it”，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并清晰表达理由。

例: I prefer typing because it's easier to make changes on my smartphone, and I can easily store and share my writing with others.

× If I keep a diary at least once a week, I like spending time on writing.

✓ If I keep a diary at least once a week, I like spending time writing.

动词后面通常直接接动名词形式（-ing），但介词on后面接动名词时不需要加on，'spending time writing'是正确表达，'spending time on writing'是不自然的搭配。

× I keep a diary diary.

✓ I keep a diary.

重复了单数名词'diary'，应去掉多余的一个。

× Keeping diary helps me reflect my life experience and express my pro private emotions and it's a private space to express myself.

✓ Keeping a diary helps me reflect on my life experiences and express my private emotions, and it's a private space to express myself.

缺少冠词'a'，'reflect'后应加介词'on'，'life experience'应为复数形式，'pro private'应为'private'，句子中缺少逗号分隔，表达更清晰。

× Yes, I think maybe the way I write may change affect by technological advancement, because I used to write on a notebook but now I type it on apps.

✓ Yes, I think maybe the way I write may change, affected by technological advancement, because I used to write in a notebook but now I type on apps.

'change affect by'应为'change, affected by'，表示被动；'write on a notebook'应为'write in a notebook'，'type it on apps'中'it'多余，应去掉。

× Well, I prefer typing it because type it on my smartphone is easier to make changes and it's also easier to store and share with people.

✓ Well, I prefer typing because typing on my smartphone is easier to make changes, and it's also easier to store and share with people.

'prefer typing it'中'it'多余；'type it on my smartphone'应为'typing on my smartphone'，保持动名词形式一致。