Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りがあります。'I often like the letter and diary'は意味が不明瞭で、正しくは'Yes, I often write letters and keep a diary'のように表現すべきです。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、直接的に質問に答えることが重要です。

例: Yes, I write quite often. I usually write letters to my friends and keep a diary to record my daily experiences.

提案: 内容は理解できますが、文法と語彙の使い方に改善の余地があります。'a letter'は複数形の'letters'にし、'has a power'は'natural expression'としては不自然です。より具体的で自然な表現を使い、接続詞を活用して論理的に話を展開しましょう。

例: I enjoy writing letters to my friends and family because I believe letters have the power to connect people and make them feel appreciated.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多いです。'When I will be a student?'は不自然な表現で、'When I become a student'が正しいです。質問に対して直接的かつ明確に答え、文法を正しく使うことが必要です。

例: Yes, I think what I write will change because my motivation and attitude will evolve. For example, when I become a student, I plan to start writing a blog.

提案: 'because typing'の部分が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確に述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。また、語彙の選択も改善できます。

例: I like both typing and handwriting, but I prefer handwriting because typing feels a bit monotonous. Handwriting, on the other hand, feels more personal and energetic.

× Yes, I often like the letter and diary.

✓ Yes, I often like letters and diaries.

The nouns 'letter' and 'diary' should be plural because the student is referring to these items in general, not a specific single letter or diary. Using plural forms 'letters' and 'diaries' is appropriate here.

× I enjoy writing a letter to my friends or family because I think the letter has a power to connect with the people and feel so good.

✓ I enjoy writing letters to my friends or family because I think letters have the power to connect with people and make them feel good.

The sentence refers to letters in general, so 'letter' should be plural 'letters'. Also, 'the letter has a power' is incorrect; it should be 'letters have the power' because 'power' is uncountable here and 'letters' is plural. 'The people' should be 'people' without 'the' because it refers to people in general.

× So I think that I will write a blog. When I will be a student?

✓ So I think that I will write a blog. When will I be a student?

In English, when forming questions in the future tense with 'will', the auxiliary verb 'will' comes before the subject. Therefore, 'When I will be a student?' should be corrected to 'When will I be a student?'.

× I like both typing and handwriting, but I prefer handwriting because typing.

✓ I like both typing and handwriting, but I prefer handwriting because typing is a little too monotonous.

The sentence is incomplete after 'because typing'. It needs a verb and complement to explain why typing is less preferred. Adding 'is a little too monotonous' completes the sentence and clarifies the reason.