Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: No, I don't write a lot because I find it difficult and I'm not confident in my writing skills.

提案: 回答内容较好，但语法和用词有误，如动词形式和单复数。建议注意语法正确性，使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: I like writing stories because it helps me relax and relieve stress. Also, I usually share my stories with my friends, which helps me connect with them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句型，表达更具体的内容。

例: Yes, what I write has changed. When I was a child, I used to write a diary about my daily experiences, but now I prefer writing fiction stories set in space or at school.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但句子较长且缺少连词，建议适当分句并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer typing because it allows me to record my thoughts anytime and anywhere. Also, I can easily make changes immediately.

× I don't like the feel about writing something on the paper.

✓ I don't like the feeling of writing something on the paper.

这里“feel”应使用动名词形式“feeling”，表示“感觉”，而不是名词“feel”。同时，介词应为“of”而非“about”。

× Also I am not good at writing something, so if I want to write some but I don't know how to write.

✓ Also, I am not good at writing, so if I want to write something, I don't know how to write.

“writing something”中“something”位置不当，改为“writing”后直接接宾语“something”更自然。句子结构需调整以表达完整意思。

× I like write stories because I think it is a good way for me to relax and relieve stress.

✓ I like writing stories because I think it is a good way for me to relax and relieve stress.

动词“like”后应接动名词形式“writing”，而不是动词原形“write”。

× Also, I usually share my stories with my friend.

✓ Also, I usually share my stories with my friends.

“friend”应使用复数形式“friends”，因为通常分享故事是与多个朋友。

× I can get well with others.

✓ I can get along well with others.

“get well with”表达不正确，正确表达是“get along well with”，表示“相处融洽”。

× When I was a child I usually write a diary to record what experience on a day.

✓ When I was a child, I usually wrote a diary to record my experiences of the day.

描述过去习惯动作时，动词应使用过去式“wrote”。“what experience on a day”表达不完整，改为“my experiences of the day”更准确。

× But now I prefer write some fiction in like in the space or in the school.

✓ But now I prefer writing some fiction, like in space or at school.

“prefer”后应接动名词“writing”。“in like in the space or in the school”表达不清，改为“like in space or at school”更自然。

× I prefer typing when I am writing because I think typing is a good way for me to record everything anytime and anywhere so I can modify something immediately.

✓ I prefer typing when I am writing because I think typing is a good way for me to record everything anytime and anywhere, so I can modify things immediately.

“modify something”中“something”用复数“things”更符合语境。句子结构合理，无其他错误。