Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答比较直接，但缺少流畅自然的表达和具体细节。建议你在回答时使用更自然的表达方式，并且补充一些具体的例子或原因，使回答更丰富。

例: Actually, I don't write very often. Usually, I only practice writing when I have exams coming up, so I can improve my skills and be well prepared.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当（如“funding”应为“fun”），且句子结构不够自然。建议注意语法准确性，使用连词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的细节。

例: I like to write a diary because it helps me remember fun and memorable moments from my daily life. Many years later, when I read it, I can easily recall those special experiences.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误（如“this trends”应为“these trends”），且可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。建议注意单复数一致，适当使用连接词。

例: Yes, absolutely. As I grow older, my experiences, perspectives, and knowledge will expand, and these trends will influence what I choose to write about and how I express myself.

提案: 你的回答清晰且内容具体，但可以通过增加连接词使句子更连贯自然。建议在句子间使用连接词如“because”、“so”等，提升表达流畅度。

例: I prefer typing when I write because it is more convenient and flexible. For example, typing allows me to edit easily, organize content quickly, and share what I've written instantly.

× Why I would like to write a diary because it can help me recall funding and memorable moments from my daily life.

✓ I would like to write a diary because it can help me recall fun and memorable moments from my daily life.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure; 'Why I would like to write a diary because' is not a proper clause. It should be rephrased to 'I would like to write a diary because' to form a correct and clear sentence. Also, 'funding' seems to be a typo and should be 'fun'.

× my experience, perspectives, knowledge will expand and this trends will influence what I choose to write about and how I express myself.

✓ my experience, perspectives, and knowledge will expand and these trends will influence what I choose to write about and how I express myself.

The phrase 'this trends' is incorrect because 'trends' is plural and should be preceded by 'these' instead of 'this'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in the list for clarity.