Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda tekrar eden kelimeler ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için cümlenizi sadeleştirin ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Ayrıca, cevabınızı doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde yapılandırın.

例: I don't write very often because I find it difficult and many people have trouble reading my handwriting. Usually, I only write during exams or when typing on my computer.

提案: Cevabınızda zaman uyumsuzluğu ve eksik cümle yapıları var. Daha net ve tutarlı cevaplar vermek için geçmiş ve şimdiki zamanları doğru kullanın ve cümlenizi tamamlayın.

例: Although I don't enjoy writing much now, when I was a child, I wanted to be a writer. I tried to write science fiction stories, but they were not very good.

提案: Cevabınızda iyi bir yapı ve detaylar var ancak 'precious' kelimesi yanlış kullanılmış. Daha uygun kelimeler seçerek anlamı netleştirin ve cümlelerinizi daha doğal hale getirin.

例: Yes, I believe my writing will change as I get older and start working in a business environment. I will need to write reports, emails, and proposals that require a more formal and professional style. Therefore, my writing will become more structured and precise to meet these demands.

提案: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin ve doğru kelime seçimleri yapın.

例: I prefer typing because my handwriting is poor and difficult for others to read, especially my teachers. Typing on my computer is easier and more convenient for me.

× lots of people can't read my writings

✓ lots of people can't read my writing

The word 'writing' is an uncountable noun when referring to the act or style of writing, so it should not be pluralized as 'writings'.

× most of the people can't read my writings

✓ most people can't read my writing

The phrase 'most of the people' is better expressed as 'most people' in this context, and 'writing' should be singular and uncountable, not 'writings'.

× I try to write science fiction books, but. It's not good.

✓ I tried to write science fiction books, but they were not good.

The verb 'try' should be in the past tense 'tried' to match the past time frame. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be connected properly with a subject and verb for clarity.

× when I was a kid, I want to be a writer

✓ when I was a kid, I wanted to be a writer

The verb 'want' should be in the past tense 'wanted' to agree with the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a kid'.

× I prefer typing in from my computer.

✓ I prefer typing on my computer.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'typing' and 'computer' is 'on'.

× It's more easy and useful I think.

✓ It's easier and more useful, I think.

The comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier', not 'more easy'. Also, a comma is needed before 'I think' for clarity.