Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用存在错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复表达。

例: I didn't write much in the past, so my writing skills were poor. But now, because I need to take an important test, I write a lot to improve my skills.

提案: 回答内容较好，但结尾部分不完整，缺少连贯的句子。建议补充完整句子，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer to write my diary because it helps me record my daily experiences and reflect on my feelings. For example, when I feel tired or sad, writing allows me to express my emotions and feel more relaxed. Additionally, looking back at my diary helps me understand myself better.

提案: 回答较完整，但有语法错误和重复表达。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: To be honest, I don't think the things I write will change much because I plan to keep my daily writing habit. For example, I usually write a diary every day to record my experiences. This routine will probably continue in the future. Writing regularly helps me reflect on my life and improve my language skills.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达偏好和原因，并完成句子。

例: I prefer typing when I write because I use my phone to record my writing. It is very convenient, especially when I have ideas quickly.

× In the past I'm not usually like right, so my rescue is very poor, but now I need take part in the else test, so I usually write a lot.

✓ In the past, I didn't usually write, so my writing is very poor, but now I need to take part in another test, so I usually write a lot.

句子中时态使用错误，'I'm not usually like right' 应改为过去时态表达过去的习惯，'need take' 缺少不定式的 'to'，'else test' 应改为 'another test'。建议使用正确的过去时态和不定式结构。

× It can help me to improve my writing skills and help me to improve my.

✓ It can help me to improve my writing skills and help me to improve myself.

句子末尾缺少宾语，'improve my' 不完整，应补充完整宾语 'myself'。

× I prefer to write my diary because it helps me to record my daily experiences and reflect on my feeling.

✓ I prefer to write in my diary because it helps me to record my daily experiences and reflect on my feelings.

'write my diary' 应为 'write in my diary'，表示在日记中写东西；'feeling' 应为复数 'feelings'，因为指多种感受。

× Additionally, looking back at my diary.

✓ Additionally, looking back at my diary helps me understand myself better.

该句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。应补充谓语使句子完整。

× To be honest, I don't think the things I write would change much because I plan to remain a daily writing habit.

✓ To be honest, I don't think the things I write will change much because I plan to maintain a daily writing habit.

'would' 用于假设语气，此处表达未来事实应使用 'will'；'remain a daily writing habit' 应改为 'maintain a daily writing habit'，更符合表达习惯。

× For example, I usually write a diary every day to record myself and experiences.

✓ For example, I usually write a diary every day to record myself and my experiences.

'experiences' 前缺少所有格 'my'，使表达更准确。

× Writing regularly help me to reflect on my life and improve my language skill.

✓ Writing regularly helps me to reflect on my life and improve my language skills.

主语 'Writing regularly' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 's'；'skill' 应为复数 'skills'，表示语言能力的多个方面。

× I prefer typing when I I'm writing for the reason of that use the phone to record my tool writing.

✓ I prefer typing when I'm writing because I use my phone to record my writing.

句子结构混乱，'when I I'm writing' 重复，应为 'when I'm writing'；'for the reason of that' 应改为 'because'；'record my tool writing' 不通顺，应为 'record my writing'。

× It's really convenient when I have a source and when I.

✓ It's really convenient when I have a source and when I need to write.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清。应补充完整句子。