Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“when I had to”应为“when I have to”，并且可以更自然地表达观点，避免重复。

例: To be honest, I don't write very often because writing isn't my strong suit. I usually only practice writing when I have to prepare for exams that require essays.

提案: 注意时态和语法错误，如“helped”应为“help”，并且句子结构可以更简洁自然。

例: I prefer writing diaries because they help me recall my daily experiences in detail. This not only helps me remember wonderful moments but also serves as a great way to reflect on my personal growth over time.

提案: 注意主谓一致和单复数形式，如“styles and ideas tends”应为“styles and ideas tend”，并且“complex sentence and ideals”应为“complex sentences and ideas”。句子应更流畅。

例: Yes, I believe what I write changes as I gain experience and knowledge. My writing style and ideas tend to evolve. For example, when I was young, my writing was simpler, but now I try to express myself with more complex sentences and ideas.

提案: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时避免重复“because I think”。

例: I prefer typing since it is more convenient and flexible. For instance, when I write online documents, it's much easier to correct mistakes than with handwriting. Additionally, these documents are simpler to organize and store.

× I only practice writing when I had to prepare for exams that require me to write essays.

✓ I only practice writing when I have to prepare for exams that require me to write essays.

这里的时间是现在时态，表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时'have'，而不是过去时'had'。

× I prefer writing Diaries because they allow me to recall my daily experiences in details.

✓ I prefer writing diaries because they allow me to recall my daily experiences in detail.

'Diaries'不需要大写，且'detail'在这里作为不可数名词使用，应该用单数形式。

× This can not only helped me to remember wonderful moments in life and serve as a splendid way to reflect my personal growth over time.

✓ This can not only help me to remember wonderful moments in life but also serve as a splendid way to reflect my personal growth over time.

'can'后面应该接动词原形，不能用过去式'helped'。另外，连接词应使用'but also'来表达递进关系。

× Yes, I think the things I write would change as I gain experiences and knowledge, my writing styles and ideas tends to evolve.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write will change as I gain experience and knowledge; my writing styles and ideas tend to evolve.

'would'应改为将来时态'will'表示将来变化；'experiences'应为不可数名词'experience'；'tends'应与复数主语'writings styles and ideas'保持一致，改为'tend'。

× For example, when I was young my writing was simpler, but now I try to express myself with complex sentence and ideals.

✓ For example, when I was young my writing was simpler, but now I try to express myself with complex sentences and ideas.

'sentence'和'ideal'应使用复数形式'sentences'和'ideas'，因为这里指的是多种句子和想法。

× Also, those online documents are simpler to organize and store.

✓ Also, those online documents are easier to organize and store.

'simpler'通常用于形容外观或结构，表达容易时应使用'easier'，更符合语境。