Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然流畅。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并简洁明了地回答问题。

例: I don't write a lot at the moment because I am very busy with work and household responsibilities, so I have little free time to write.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构，明确表达写作内容和原因。

例: I like to write about my daughters. I keep a diary to record their growth because it helps me remember important moments.

提案: 回答内容不够具体，表达混乱且有语法错误。建议明确说明未来写作内容的变化，并使用正确的语法。

例: Yes, my writing will probably change in the future. Currently, I write about my children and work, but later I might write about other topics like my hobbies.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简洁表达偏好，并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

例: It depends on the task. I prefer typing when I need clear notes for work or study, but I handwrite short notes.

× I suppose I didn't write a lot currently because I have no more free time to write some things in my daily life.

✓ I suppose I don't write a lot currently because I have no more free time to write some things in my daily life.

句子中使用了过去时态'didn't write'，但句意表达的是现在的情况，应该使用一般现在时'don't write'。

× Actually, I have more responsibility about working and households, so I have no more time to write down it.

✓ Actually, I have more responsibility for working and household chores, so I have no more time to write it down.

'responsibility about'用法不正确，正确搭配是'responsibility for'。另外，'households'应改为'household chores'更合适，'write down it'应改为'write it down'。

× Personally, I came to write some things about my children girls for example, I always keep a diary about their girls because I think it's an interesting way to recall the their growth and can.

✓ Personally, I like to write some things about my daughters. For example, I always keep a diary about them because I think it's an interesting way to recall their growth.

'children girls'表达不正确，应使用'daughters'。'the their growth'中'the'多余，应去掉。句子结构混乱，需简化表达。

× In fact, nowadays I sometimes focusing on write down some things about my children and working, and in the future I would like to write down some things about 11.

✓ In fact, nowadays I sometimes focus on writing down some things about my children and work, and in the future I would like to write down some things about them.

'sometimes focusing'应为'sometimes focus'，动词后接动名词时应使用'writing down'。'working'应改为'noun'形式'work'。'about 11'不明确，改为'about them'。

× It's depending on the test that I need to write.

✓ It depends on the task that I need to write.

'It's depending'用法错误，应为一般现在时'It depends'。'test'应改为'task'更符合上下文。

× For example, if I need to write write down some more clear notes about working and study, I sometimes prefer typing them.

✓ For example, if I need to write down some clearer notes about work and study, I sometimes prefer typing them.

'write write down'重复，应去掉一个'write'。'more clear'应为比较级'clearer'。'working and study'应改为'nouns'形式'work and study'。

× On the other hand, if I need to take a short note, I will handwriting.

✓ On the other hand, if I need to take a short note, I will handwrite it.

'will handwriting'错误，'handwriting'是名词，动词应为'handwrite'，且需要宾语'it'。