Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免语法错误，同时回答应更直接和简洁。

例: I don't write very often because I'm not confident in my writing skills. However, I want to improve by practicing more regularly.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并明确表达写作内容和原因，增加细节使回答更具体。

例: I like to write diaries because they help me record my daily life and remember important moments from my childhood.

提案: 回答结构较好，但语法和用词需改进，建议注意时态一致和冠词使用，同时可以用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, the things I write have changed. When I was a child, I kept a diary, but now I mainly write study notes and work schedules because my priorities have shifted.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，明确表达偏好并给出具体原因。

例: I prefer typing when writing because I use devices like tablets and smartphones, which have convenient typing apps that make writing faster and easier.

× I'm not always write aloud because I'm scared of the right skill.

✓ I'm not always writing aloud because I'm scared of the right skill.

这里动词write需要用动名词形式writing，因为前面有助动词be的现在分词形式，表示正在进行的动作。

× I'm not always write aloud because I'm scared of the right skill.

✓ I'm not always writing aloud because I'm scared of the writing skill.

这里的介词短语scared of后面应接名词，right skill不合适，应该用writing skill表示写作技能。

× What's more, I want to enhance myself and improve these skills.

✓ What's more, I want to improve myself and improve these skills.

enhance oneself用法不当，通常用improve oneself表示提升自己。

× I don't write very often, but I write there is when I was a child.

✓ I don't write very often, but I did write when I was a child.

这里的there is用法错误，应去掉，改为过去时did write表示过去的动作。

× It record my life and everything I want to remember.

✓ It recorded my life and everything I wanted to remember.

描述过去的动作，动词record应使用过去式recorded，want也应改为过去式wanted。

× but now I'm a adult I have a lot of study notes or work schedule to write, so it has changed.

✓ but now I'm an adult I have a lot of study notes or work schedules to write, so it has changed.

adult前应使用不定冠词an，work schedule应使用复数形式work schedules。

× I prefer typing when wall writing because I have a lot of techniques such as tablet, smartphones and iPads.

✓ I prefer typing when writing because I have a lot of devices such as tablets, smartphones and iPads.

wall writing用法错误，应为when writing；techniques用词不当，应为devices表示设备；tablet应为复数形式tablets。

× They have put some typing app so that was convenient.

✓ They have some typing apps, so that is convenient.

have put用法错误，应直接用have表示拥有；typing app应为复数typing apps；was应改为is，保持时态一致。