Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
Yes, I prefer silent environments and calm environments. I don't like to annoy people by calling them much, so I prefer sending text messages over phone calls and sometimes I find myself having difficulty to speak because.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
I like to write about everything and anything. I like to respond to the questions by writing instead of voice notes.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
I did not get the point of this question yet.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
It depends. For clarity of sending message I would prefer typing, but in situations that require from me fast response, I'll be handwriting down the information.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 55.0提案: Try to answer the question directly first, then add relevant details. Avoid repeating similar ideas and incomplete sentences. For example, start with 'Yes, I write quite often because I prefer communicating through text rather than calls.' Then add supporting reasons clearly and coherently.
例: Yes, I write quite often because I prefer communicating through text rather than calls. For instance, I find silent and calm environments help me focus better when writing messages or notes.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 60.0提案: Be more specific about what you like to write and explain why. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I enjoy writing personal journals and messages because it helps me express my thoughts clearly.'
例: I enjoy writing personal journals and messages because it helps me express my thoughts clearly. Moreover, I find writing more convenient than sending voice notes in many situations.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 30.0提案: Try to understand the question and give a direct answer. If unsure, you can ask for clarification politely or give your best guess. For example, 'If you mean whether my writing topics will change, I think they might as my interests evolve.'
例: If you mean whether my writing topics will change, I think they might as my interests evolve over time. For example, I might write more about my career in the future.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 70.0提案: Good answer but try to use linking words to improve coherence and avoid minor grammar mistakes. For example, 'I prefer typing because it is clearer; however, when I need to respond quickly, I handwrite notes.'
例: I prefer typing because it is clearer and faster for sending messages; however, when I need to respond quickly or jot down ideas, I handwrite notes.
文法
× sometimes I find myself having difficulty to speak because.
✓ sometimes I find myself having difficulty speaking because.
The verb 'have difficulty' is followed by the gerund form of the verb, so 'speaking' is correct instead of 'to speak'. This is a common collocation in English.
× I'll be handwriting down the information.
✓ I'll be handwriting the information down.
The phrasal verb 'handwriting down' is incorrect. The correct form is 'handwriting the information down' or simply 'writing down the information'. The present participle 'handwriting' is used here as a verb, so the object should follow it directly.
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