Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
No, I don't write a lot because I think it takes a lot of time and I always use voice message to communicate with my friends.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
I'd like to write social media posts because I like to share my life with my friends and I'd like to get feedback and know what they think about the posts.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
Yes, I think the things I write would change as I get older because my experiences and my knowledge would change and I know a lot about others.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
I prefer typing when I are writing. I think typing is more convenient when in modern time because smartphone is always with me.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较为简洁，但缺少连接词和更具体的细节，表达略显简单。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”后补充更多具体原因或例子，使回答更自然流畅。
例: No, I don't write a lot because it takes a lot of time, and I usually prefer sending voice messages to my friends since it's faster and more convenient.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答内容较完整，但可以通过使用更多连接词和丰富词汇使表达更自然。建议增加一些具体例子或感受，提升内容的丰富度。
例: I enjoy writing social media posts because they allow me to share moments from my life with friends, and I appreciate receiving their feedback, which helps me feel connected.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，且表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和语法的准确性，并用连接词使句子更连贯，同时具体说明变化的内容。
例: Yes, I believe the things I write will change as I grow older because my experiences and knowledge will expand, allowing me to write about different topics more deeply.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有语法错误（主谓不一致），表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，使用更地道的表达，并补充具体原因。
例: I prefer typing when I write because it's more convenient nowadays; I always have my smartphone with me, so I can type quickly anytime.
文法
× I prefer typing when I are writing.
✓ I prefer typing when I am writing.
这里主语是第一人称单数“I”，谓语动词应使用“am”而不是“are”，这是主谓一致错误。正确的表达是“I am writing”。
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