Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

例: I don't write very often nowadays because I usually take notes or type on my computer. However, I do write formulas by hand when necessary.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议明确表达喜欢写日记的原因，并使用连贯的句子。

例: I like to write diaries by hand because it helps me remember my daily experiences better and I enjoy the feeling of writing with my hand.

提案: 回答不完整，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议补充现在写作内容的具体变化，并使用连接词。

例: Definitely yes. When I was a child, I often wrote about snacks and my classmates' relationships, but now I write more about my studies and future plans.

提案: 回答表达不完整，句子结构不清晰。建议明确区分两种写作方式的使用场景，并补充具体原因。

例: I prefer typing when I need to take notes quickly, such as in class or at work. However, I write by hand when dealing with complex information that requires careful thinking.

× I'm not writing quite often now because most of the time I take notes or write down something using the computer, but when I need to write some formulas.

✓ I don't write quite often now because most of the time I take notes or write down something using the computer, but when I need to write some formulas.

这里的“I'm not writing”使用了现在进行时，但表达的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时“don't write”。

× I usually take some Diaries by hand because I think it it snow so I can enjoy the time using my hand to record something in my memory.

✓ I usually write some diaries by hand because I think it is nice so I can enjoy the time using my hand to record something in my memory.

“take some Diaries”用词不当，应该用“write diaries”；“it it snow”语法错误，应为“it is nice”或类似表达。

× Definitely yes. When I was a child I often wrote something about the snacks and the relationship between my classmates, but now I write down more about.

✓ Definitely yes. When I was a child I often wrote about snacks and the relationships between my classmates, but now I write more about other things.

“wrote something about the snacks”表达不准确，改为“wrote about snacks”；“relationship”应为复数“relationships”；句子末尾不完整，补充完整。

× I prefer typing when I need to take down something quickly, especially in my class or in work. But sometimes I also need to write down something by hand for some complex.

✓ I prefer typing when I need to take down something quickly, especially in my class or at work. But sometimes I also need to write down something by hand for some complex tasks.

“in work”应为“at work”；“for some complex”不完整，补充为“for some complex tasks”。