Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然流畅。建议减少重复，注意语法结构，使用更准确的词汇表达情感和习惯。

例: Yes, I write a lot. I keep a diary every day to record my feelings and experiences. Writing in my diary helps me relax and reflect on my day.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明喜欢写什么，并解释原因，避免重复和语法错误。

例: I prefer writing stories or novels because I enjoy creating characters and imagining different plots. It takes me time to plan the story carefully.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

例: No, I don't think what I write will change because since childhood, my ambition has been to become a novelist and continue writing stories.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不自然。建议简洁表达偏好，并说明原因，使用正确的词汇和句型。

例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me feel more relaxed and stimulates my imagination better than typing.

× I write, I write and my diary Diaries every day and to ensure my feelings of our days.

✓ I write, I write in my diary every day to express my feelings about our days.

这里的“diary Diaries”出现了单复数混用的问题，应该使用单数形式“diary”。另外，句子结构不完整，需调整使表达更清晰。

× I think the writing on the diary is relax things to me.

✓ I think writing in the diary is relaxing to me.

介词“on”用错了，应该用“in”表示写在日记里。同时，“relax things”表达不正确，应改为形容词“relaxing”。

× I prefer to write a story or a novel and I always take a lot of some time to to to think what I should formulate the story so.

✓ I prefer to write a story or a novel and I always take some time to think about how I should formulate the story.

“a lot of some time”表达重复且不正确，应简化为“some time”。另外，句子中多余的“to”需要删除。

× No, I don't think the things I I write will change because I because my ambition from my childhood is to be a, a, a people, a person who always write a novel.

✓ No, I don't think the things I write will change because my ambition since childhood has been to be a person who always writes novels.

“people”是复数，应该用单数“person”。“write”应改为第三人称单数“writes”，因为主语是“a person”。“from my childhood”更自然的表达是“since childhood”。

× As for me, I prefer handwriting because. Because the handwrite. Because if I do the handwriting I will feel more relaxable and and have a more imaginative thinking.

✓ As for me, I prefer handwriting because if I write by hand, I feel more relaxed and have more imaginative thinking.

“relaxable”不是正确的形容词，应使用“relaxed”。“have a more imaginative thinking”中“thinking”不可数，去掉冠词“a”。句子中多余的“Because”需要删除。