Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, use 'novels' instead of 'novel' and avoid redundancy by not repeating 'write' too often. Also, try to add a little more detail to enrich your answer.

例: Yes, I write a lot because I am a writer and I enjoy creating novels. Writing allows me to express my creativity and share stories with others.

提案: Your answer needs grammatical corrections and clearer structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. For example, say 'I like to write long romantic stories because I am a romantic person. Recently, many of my stories have become popular worldwide.'

例: I like to write long romantic stories because I am a romantic person. Recently, many of my stories have gained popularity around the world.

提案: Your answer is quite confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your thoughts clearly with linking words. For example, start with your current opinion, then explain how your writing might change in the future due to trends.

例: To be honest, I don't think my writing will change much right now because I am satisfied with it. However, in the future, my writing may change to follow new trends and the preferences of readers.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and grammar correction. Use linking words to connect your points logically. For example, explain how handwriting benefits you and why you prefer it over typing.

例: I prefer handwriting because it enhances my connection with the writing process. Moreover, handwriting exercises my hand muscles and positively influences my mind, encouraging my body to stay active.

× I like to write novel.

✓ I like to write novels.

The word 'novel' should be plural 'novels' because the student is referring to writing more than one novel. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when talking about more than one.

× I like write long stories of romantic couples because I am a romantic person and recent I write many romantic stories which is many popular in over the world.

✓ I like to write long stories about romantic couples because I am a romantic person and recently I have written many romantic stories which are very popular all over the world.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'stories about romantic couples' is correct. Also, 'recent' should be 'recently' to function as an adverb. 'Write' should be in present perfect 'have written' to indicate recent actions. 'Which is many popular' is incorrect; it should be 'which are very popular'. 'In over the world' should be 'all over the world'.

× So to be very honest now I am think there is no change in my writing because it is very good at now time but after this time in the future the writing is changed because of changing time and the trend of people like I change my writing.

✓ So to be very honest, now I think there is no change in my writing because it is very good at this time, but in the future, my writing will change because of changing times and people's trends, so I will change my writing.

The phrase 'I am think' is incorrect; it should be 'I think' (simple present). 'At now time' is incorrect; 'at this time' or 'now' is correct. 'The writing is changed' should be 'my writing will change' to express future change. 'Because of changing time and the trend of people like I change my writing' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I prefer handwriting because it increase the sense of my writing and also my handwriting and the handwriting is a best exercise of hand and also handwriting in influence mind and encourage our body to do many activities.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it increases the sense of my writing and also my handwriting, and handwriting is the best exercise for the hand. Also, handwriting influences the mind and encourages our body to do many activities.

'Increase' should be 'increases' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'A best exercise' should be 'the best exercise' because 'best' is a superlative adjective requiring the definite article 'the'. 'Exercise of hand' should be 'exercise for the hand'. 'Handwriting in influence mind' is incorrect; it should be 'handwriting influences the mind'. 'Encourage' should be 'encourages' to agree with singular subject 'handwriting'.