Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
Yes, I do quite a lot, especially for my studies. Writing helps me organize my thoughts clearly, and I often write emails, reports and sometimes even short stories. Or for relaxation is a useful skill that I try to improve regularly.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
I I enjoy watching personal journals and short stories. Writing journals allows me to reflect on my daily experience and emotions, which help me understand myself better. Additionally, I'm crafting short stories. Let me explode my creativity and express ideas in an emergency native.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
Yes, definitely As I grow older my perspective and my experience will change after year by year. So I will be that will be the significant change as I grow older.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
I prefer typing when I'm writing because it's much faster and more convenient. For example, I can use a lot of apps and tools to enhance my writing. However, I sometimes enjoy handwriting for personal notes since I since it feels more personal and helps me remember information better.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như câu 'Or for relaxation is a useful skill...' không rõ nghĩa và gây nhầm lẫn. Bạn nên tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh và giữ câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, tự nhiên hơn.
例: Yes, I write quite a lot, mainly for my studies. Writing helps me organize my thoughts clearly. I often write emails, reports, and sometimes short stories for relaxation. It's a useful skill that I try to improve regularly.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 50.0提案: Bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ 'I enjoy watching personal journals' nên là 'writing personal journals', và câu 'Let me explode my creativity and express ideas in an emergency native' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu cú rõ ràng hơn.
例: I enjoy writing personal journals and short stories. Writing journals helps me reflect on my daily experiences and emotions, which allows me to understand myself better. Additionally, writing short stories lets me express my creativity and share interesting ideas.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 45.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'So I will be that will be the significant change' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý rõ ràng hơn.
例: Yes, definitely. As I grow older, my perspectives and experiences will change year by year. Therefore, the things I write will also change significantly over time.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một lỗi nhỏ lặp từ 'since I since it'. Bạn nên chú ý tránh lặp từ và có thể thêm một câu kết để câu trả lời hoàn chỉnh hơn.
例: I prefer typing when I write because it's much faster and more convenient. For example, I can use various apps and tools to improve my writing. However, I sometimes enjoy handwriting personal notes because it feels more personal and helps me remember information better.
文法
× Or for relaxation is a useful skill that I try to improve regularly.
✓ Writing for relaxation is a useful skill that I try to improve regularly.
The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb structure, making it incomplete and confusing. Adding 'Writing' as the subject clarifies the sentence and completes the thought.
× I I enjoy watching personal journals and short stories.
✓ I enjoy writing personal journals and short stories.
The sentence incorrectly uses 'watching' instead of 'writing' for journals and stories, which are written forms. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error. Correcting the verb and removing the duplicate pronoun improves clarity.
× Let me explode my creativity and express ideas in an emergency native.
✓ Let me explore my creativity and express ideas in an imaginative way.
The phrase 'explode my creativity' is incorrect; 'explore' is the appropriate verb. 'In an emergency native' is nonsensical; likely intended as 'in an imaginative way' or similar. Correcting these improves meaning and grammatical correctness.
× Yes, definitely As I grow older my perspective and my experience will change after year by year.
✓ Yes, definitely. As I grow older, my perspective and experience will change year by year.
The original sentence lacks proper punctuation and has awkward phrasing 'after year by year.' Adding a period and commas and rephrasing improves readability and grammatical correctness.
× So I will be that will be the significant change as I grow older.
✓ So that will be a significant change as I grow older.
The original sentence is redundant and awkwardly constructed. Simplifying the sentence removes redundancy and clarifies the meaning.
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