Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
Yes, I have since I was young. The teacher will ask us to buy the dairy in order to remember or recall what happened in the past. And once we grow up, we look, look back and realize how how we are at the moment. It reminds me of past experience.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
I like writing fictions. They're basically about imagination, like another country or a new setup space, a new environment to create my own character and introduce them to a new journey. To write a story about courage or.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
Yes, often when a serious event happens, most people write it. If I write it just based on the current judgment has happened, then. But the reality changes a lot. So in many cases you will turn to the opposite side and it turns out the reality is the.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
I prefer handwriting. It's easier to remember the words that are recorded and it's better to write on paper because it can strengthen the memories and else is is not harmful to our eyes than the typing.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连贯的句子结构。
例: Yes, I have been writing since I was young. My teachers encouraged us to keep a diary to remember past events. Looking back at my entries now helps me reflect on how I've changed over time.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答应完整，避免句子未完成。建议使用连贯的连接词，并具体说明喜欢写作的原因。
例: I enjoy writing fiction because it allows me to create imaginary worlds and characters. For example, I like to write stories about courage and adventure in new environments.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议组织完整句子，明确表达观点，并用具体例子支持。
例: Yes, I think what I write can change over time. For instance, after a serious event, my initial opinion might differ from my later understanding as I learn more details.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答较好，但表达稍显重复和不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。
例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember words better. Writing on paper also strengthens my memory and is less harmful to my eyes compared to typing.
文法
× Yes, I have since I was young.
✓ Yes, I have been doing it since I was young.
这里缺少了动词，'have'后面应该接动词的现在分词形式，表示从过去持续到现在的动作。应使用现在完成进行时。
× The teacher will ask us to buy the dairy in order to remember or recall what happened in the past.
✓ The teacher will ask us to buy the diary in order to remember or recall what happened in the past.
单词'dairy'是指乳制品，正确的词应为'diary'，表示日记。
× It reminds me of past experience.
✓ It reminds me of past experiences.
'experience'在这里应使用复数形式，表示多次经历。
× I like writing fictions.
✓ I like writing fiction.
'fiction'作为不可数名词，表示虚构文学，不用复数形式。
× like another country or a new setup space, a new environment to create my own character and introduce them to a new journey.
✓ like another country or a new space setup, a new environment to create my own characters and introduce them to a new journey.
'setup space'表达不自然，应调整为'space setup'；'character'应为复数形式，因为后文用'他们'指代。
× To write a story about courage or.
✓ To write a story about courage.
句子不完整，'or'后面缺少内容，应去掉。
× If I write it just based on the current judgment has happened, then.
✓ If I write it just based on the current judgment that has happened, then.
缺少关系代词'that'引导定语从句。
× But the reality changes a lot.
✓ But reality changes a lot.
'reality'前不需要定冠词'the'，因为这里泛指现实。
× So in many cases you will turn to the opposite side and it turns out the reality is the.
✓ So in many cases you will turn to the opposite side and it turns out the reality is different.
句子不完整，缺少谓语或补语，需补充完整。
× and else is is not harmful to our eyes than the typing.
✓ and it is not more harmful to our eyes than typing.
'else'用法错误，应使用'it'；重复'is'；比较结构不完整，需补充'more'。
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